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person Valerium
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually quite enjoying this. I can't wait until she dumps Ron. I never thought they made a good couple to begin with. :P
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, some things never change, Ron is absolutely clueless. You've made a masterpiece out of your friend's prompts. I've enjoyed seeing the inner thoughts and feelings of Severus and Hermione. It's funny how he didn't totally dismiss out of hand, any thoughts about Severus and Hermione messing around on him. He was so close there for a moment. I can't wait to see what happens next. Very well written, loving it!
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you would finish this! This is the second time I've read this and I still love it. And still find myself bitterly disappointed that you haven't taken it any farther.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More! That last chapter was absolutely hilarious with Ron stumbling through those sentences and Severus reacting to each one....lovely!
person Penny
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written story...I really appreciate the good story line and plot, in addition to good grammar, spelling and all those things that make a story pleasant to read. Looking forward to reading more!
person rawsavon
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In regards to the story writing, I enjoyed the attention to detail
person a_reader
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Your writing is strong, the dialogue believable, and consistent characterization. Plus, I love Ron-shaped angst :)
person MollysSister
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ron is an ass. Now we have even more proof. I do hope Severus stops to consider what Ron says. He is only making himself look foolish if all he and Hermione can do is have bad sexxors. Now run don't walk to where HG is patroling and get busy in the hall!! woot!
person leffe
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I like your description of the other students in the library. Keep up the good work!
person Aurette
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Come back! Need more!