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schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Ron needs another bashing. This time from Minerva and Molly that would be a lot of fun.......... LOL
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, it had it all:
Sneaking around and having sex everywhere in the castle
Getting caught, just holding hands
A HOT and steamy smut scene
And Ron getting what he deserviced

I don't know how you are going to top that with the next chapter!?!?!?!?!?!
person use2b2t2
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well worth the wait. Woll Severus find out that she never told Ron about him? I suspect that Ron was talking to Snape about other things and possibly mentioned to Snape about the relationship he was hiding from Hermione. Looking forward to next chapter.

Mare
person EvaBrick
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for finishing this! This is the best Severus/Hermione story I've every read... and I've read pretty well all of them. :) Two thumbs up!
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinally! Welcome back! I'm so glad you decided to continue this and it was a fantastic comeback if I do say so myself ;). Loved the lemons, love that Ron is gone and love that she finally feels free enough to see what was happening and did I mention the lemons? :D Dark corridor, desperate for each other lovin'! Definitely up my alley! Loved the fact he kept saying "You chose me."

Wolf

P.S.I knew Ron had found someone! I just knew it and what a harsh way to break it to your girlfriend of 3 years! What a ginormous PR**K! :)
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Merlin am I glad you're back! I hated that this story just stopped where it did. Thank you for not leaving it. And, I could positively kiss you for that chapter. The only downside was that Ron got to say it first. Jerk! I hope he was faking it to make her jealous, but I fear not. Now he won't know how much he actually lost in tossing her away. But, my joy in having her and Severus together mostly overrides me wanting Ron to suffer greatly. lol Thanks luv and I really do look forward to more really soon! Welcome back, HG4eva
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's so wonderful to see you back!

I am so glad that Hermione and Severus are now free to pursue a relationship together. The only thing that worries me greatly is that it is so important to Severus that Hermione chose him. Ron broke up with her before she could break up with him. He will be spreading the word. What if Severus feels like he was a convenient plan B?

Great chapter!
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for coming back and get rid of Ron so quickly!
person Mary
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pretty awesome chapter and I'm glad you didn't gave up!
person Nightqueen
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I'm so happy to see a new chapter of this story! As always fabulous job. I adore the way you've written both Hermione and Severus! And my God the intensity between them is hotter than fire! They absolutely burn together! As if there was any real choice between the two! LOL There is only one Man in this story and I do believe he wins hands down!!! Delicious! Can't wait for the next chapter!