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by MissLibrarian

person di
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is that the end? I hope not, you could follow this through the end of her apprenticeship to see if she stays or not.
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hot, and rather sweet, and just enough angst and anger - I am enjoying this immensely. It never seems right to say that one is looking forward to a last chapter, so I'll just say I am looking forward to the next.
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't believe I haven't seen your story before now. I LOVE this fucking story so much you are such a talented writed! Huzzah for punching ron in the goddamn nose and yay for Severus and Hermione! Brava!
person MollysSister
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well thank heavens Ron dumped Hermione first. Saved her the trouble! Don't let the door hit you on the ass on the way out Ron. Bye!

Hellllllllo Severs and semi public sexxors! woot!
person curlyjor
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is so incredibly written. I love the relationship Hermione and Snape have too. I think they are so wonderful together.. I'm so glad Snape broke Ron's nose... Can't wait for more. :)
person Mary
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So cool! Go Severus and break the little F***er's face mny times more!
AWESOME!
person EvaBrick
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWW! That's so sweet!
person witch
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved every chapter of your story! Your writing style is top-notch and the characters are realistic...actually, I would like to pay you a special compliment on your original student characters. Ah, teenagers! So annoying yet adorable at times. Lol.
I did find myself really annoyed with Hermione's behaviour on here. Though very intelligent, she was totally oblivious of what was good for her. And Ron? *humphs*...a perfect example of a ginger arse, if you ever saw one.
Looking forward to your update with great anticipation! :)
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woo! Oh my god! Woo! and finally yay! I should probably explain that a little more:). Loved the beginning of the chapter that they were enjoying each other. My heart sank as they were found out and I thought it was going to be a sad end to the relationship. They got back together, everything worked out for her not being a student anymore and continuing her studies with Severus and damn!, I felt it along with Severus the satisfaction of punching Ron in the nose! Lovely. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wolf
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES! That was my reaction. An out loud, scared the sleeping dogs, far too loud in my quiet living "YES!" I wish he'd hit him again when he woke up, but I know that would have been beneath him. Thank you thank you thank you! Now, to let them actually say the "L" word....

Hugs and thanks to you,
HG4eva