rate_review Reviews

Definitely one of my favorite new stories. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Wow, that was impressive--loved how you had him recognize she was faking it.

Oh god!... okay, need to calm myself and cool off! That was hot! The writing was beautiful and I was with them the whole way and I tell you I could have thumped Severus for suddenly backtracking into Professor/Student mode! Grr! Bold Boy! And Hermione's shy confession to never having an orgasm by a man? God, how can you resist Severus Snape? That would never happen with this man! What the hell does Ron be doing for god's sake? ;)

Anyway, keep up the good work. Look forward to more!

Wolf

This is marvelous!

I used to try that line- reviews make me upload faster. But you'll upload it when its finished- reviews or not- in hopes that there will be more reviews.

It was unique and yet so un-Snape like at the beginning, though I suppose everyone has their breaking point.

I am intrigued to see what they get up to in the office. At one point in chapter two you said something about him lifting up her skirt and then went back to referencing her in jeans. Just keep consistent.

At first I was displeased with his lack of typical characterization- jumping out and teasing her in a way was very jarring and 'not severus' for me- but you made up for it in the later chapter.

Cheers,
CC

nice! love your details. :)

I love this story :) update soon please :)

You better upload double fast then! I loved this chapter! I was so with them in the moment when the Fifth years were chattering about them. I would have so loved to have seen Severus' laughter for that. Adorable and so freeing. In the majority of stories I never see Severus just having a bit of a laugh, especially without being in character and it was incredibly hot too. Amazing what the right man can do for you! ;)

Wolf

Still loving it. Please keep it coming.

This is a fun little ditty, so far. I love the hotness factor, too. ;-) Looking forward to them getting to his room. Thanks! HG4eva