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If it's reviews your after - you'll receive plenty in abundance if you'd post your stories on Ashwinder or Petulant Poetess! Or you may have already and I just haven't seen it - but this story is amazingly well-written, please keep it up and I can't wait to read the rest of it. I really am enjoying your characterizations of Hermione and Sev and look forward to finding out more. :)

I must clarify. When I said "study you," I did not mean for your errors. I meant that I would be watching for the things you do right. Those things that make me tingle with an excitement beyond the sexual. I believe that you write very vividly, and it would please me to develop my skills to your level.

So thank you. Thanks for an awesome contribution and know that I'll be reading your piece for as long as you post it.

Amazing, hot hot hot~~~~~~~~~~

Wow...lets just say after the past few weeks I have been having with work and school (seems like as soon as I get home I fall asleep and the next day comes too soon) I was finally able to catch up on this story and...wow. This has honestly made my week better! I cannot wait to read more! *Sits on the floor like a child waiting for story time* Please tell me a relationship ensues!!!!

I do suppose it took you long enough. You have a good handle on your graphic scenes, one of the more enjoyable ones I've read as of late. You made a nice contrast between his eagerness in the previous chapter and hers in this one. His age came quite in handy as well. Habitual faker? Most interesting. You are, of course, the reason women have such high expectations when they make their partners dress like Snape and have sex with them in tiny broom closets and such. I am intrigued to see that you are continuing this. Where could it go from here that doesn't involve either another round of hot and steamy passion- with given the length between your updates Severus should have plenty of time to prepare for- or turning into mushy ooey gooey love. Don't let it turn to oatmeal. And I'd love to see what Pince has to say about all this when she returns to her office. The blanket brought me out of it for the slightest of moments but I wouldn't worry on it. And the brief moment of debate was priceless. "Never seduced a student to the dungeons before?" That moment was my favourite. Let's see where this ship sails you.
~CC

I like it. Please update soon.

that was HOTTTTT lol can't wait for the next chapter and hope its soon!!! keep up the good work

Awww, a slutty, needy faker with an older, needy, demanding man. lol That was brilliant! Thank you!! HG4eva

Great chapter, am loving this tale. Very descriptive and erotic in the same breath. I hope there is some future for them and this isn't just a one off.

Lu

I have a real weakness for fics that take place in the library; maybe that's the nerd in we rearing it's head. ;) Either way, you nailed it! Well written, good flow, great characterization, and terrific smut. Keep it up! Now I'm heading over to check out your other fics... :)