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for Hearts Open (at the Close)

by LiteraryBeauty

person paigeey07
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooh I love it!!!!
person Vidori
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it gave me chills. Please keep writing! Thanks so much!
person Clare M
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is just incredible! Poor Harry! I don't think I've read a story before where his lot seemed so hopeless. I'm dying to know how this works out! You are so incredibly good at writing dialogue and setting a scene.

And Draco, poor traumatized thing. He's sure in a tough position!

Love this and cannot wait to read more!

Clare
person MewMew2
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing. At this moment in time your story has my full attention. I love the way that you described Harry's magical interacting with outside forces and hinted at it's connection with Harry's subconscious. Great visualization with your wording. Excellent job! Please update once more when you have the chance.
person paigeey07
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!!
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 2!!! Soooo what is really wrong with Harry? Seemed to me he could control it!