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for Hearts Open (at the Close)

by LiteraryBeauty

person poluxtr
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING fic, loved the end =D quite unusual but just the like of ending I like ^^ Keep writing!
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very strange story. Haven't quite decided whether I like it or not. Apart from me not being sure about the storyline, it was very well written. Mostly I think it is just that it wasn't to my taste.

Don't stop writing, because I do enjoy reading your work.
person polka dot
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well of course it's all make believe but I don't see a hppy ending for Teddy's grandmother or even Teddy if he stays friendless for life. He'll be quite twisted eventually.
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco called Teddy his son! He could have left but he came back! What an amazing story!!!
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Gosh. This is so good, it's unbelievable. I mean, the sheer instability of Harry and all the surrounding prolems that arise... It's a work of Art. I can not wait for the next chapter.

Kiki
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7!!! What will Draco do?
person polka dot
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Draco may have to brew Harry a poison potion, for Teddy's sake.
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, something big is about to happen! I can't wait, truly something great will appear!
person Emily
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That is so depressing :( Poor Draco, poor teddy, poor Mrs Lupin! So please that you got to finish it so many good stories like this are abandoned before their conclusion. Thank you!
person ice
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is totally awesome in a fucked up way. Why do I also have the feeling that Harry will steal teddy? Well, anywho. It's good so keep it coming! :D