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June 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please please please please please please please please update ASAP I real you've it
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG you can't leave it there?!?! More please, cookies are offered *winks*
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter, maybe me want to now more. Please update soon
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 I like this beginning. Severus being in bed with Lucius is something I could easily envision. This short chapter also has me asking questions? Why IS Severus with Lucius if he wants Harry? Is Harry dead? Alive and with another person? What has happened--or not happened--to keep these two apart?
By all means, continue with this story!
By all means, continue with this story!
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start but you say you may extend it to maybe 2-4 chapters. I think this has the potential to extend that. Your writing style is good and emotive, please carry on with it; I for one would read and review!
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far it is so heart braking. I just want to hold Severus and make it all better
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice, loving the start already. i want more!!
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmm I need at least one more chapter before being able to get enough of a feel for this story to be able to truly comment on it. Looks promising though. I look forward to seeing more.
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see what you do with this if you add more...
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oi!!! Not the evil cliffy of doom!!!!!! >:-<
You have me at the edge of my seat, and then WHAM!!! I need more!!!
You have me at the edge of my seat, and then WHAM!!! I need more!!!