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Wow what a moving story. I was almost in tears! I was trying to figure out who her husband was and I totally guessed wrong. I thought it was Draco...but was pleasantly suprised to find out that it was Severus. Very well done! I loved it!

Severus?... the greasy git?... I'm gonna puke!!!... Harry, hurry up and kill her!... anything it's better than him!

loved the story. really really good!

very nice I like how you wrote this.

Omg I love it thank you for posting this here it is my absolute fave but honestly if I had to list my top 10 faves all 10 would be yours I love ya darling!!!!!!! I still say this one shot should become a full fledge fic :-) you are awesome

Ok so the first review was my quick at work comments now I have time to completely express myself.... Honestly I do not know why this fic affects me bit all I can say is that it is sooooo well written I mean I can feel what hermione feels when she is lost inside herself but knows that there is something missing something worth fighting for I can see what she sees when she describes her room/prison or the bathroom library kitchen or even the outside with the broken fence..... I feel her confusion when Harry and Ron come to visit her hell I even feel the despair harry feels or the hopelessness Ron feels..... But I really feel it when she sees Severus and hears Severus the moment when their eyes connect everything starts to fall back into place and how he clears her a path to him without even looking away from her.... I see in my own eyes the wear that this seperation placed on hermione and severus I can feel severus' anger she does not speak to him and does not know him..... The moment when he releases her memories is soooo powerful bc they immediately jump into each others arms the other has been found the lost part of their souls has been brought back..... Omg I literally cried the first time I read this!!!!!! I started reading your stories bc someone had before you as a fave on g.e and I continued from there bc I liked how you wrote but what really sold me was this one shot after I read it I was addicted and had to read the rest of your stuff..... So thank you for your talent and thank u for sharing it with us!!!!!!!