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Loving this story so far! I'm looking forward to so many things that are gonna happen. Will we be seeing Harry's uncle again?

This story is freaking amazing! I love it so much. Very original!
Keep going!

Absolutely delicious. I love a good Blaise/Harry but there isn't as much as I would like out there. Loved it, no I completely adored this. You have done so well, I can't help but be excited at what could happen next. Please update again soon!

Great story, I hope there will be more.

WOW. I just sat here for hours reading all your 21 chapters to date. I'm not a slash fan, I'll only read if it seems interesting. And well my dear, this is more than interesting. It's bloody intriguing. Some of your characters don't seem to follow canon, which is fine by me because they all have definite traits and aren't just carbon copies of each other. I love the whole Lord and Ancient houses idea you've run with, for me it's utterly original.

I hate Ron, so kudos to you for making his behaviour so atrocious. The same for Molly too. I like the way you have decent Slytherins and then the dark ones, who are so un Slytherin that they get everyone's attention. I like your characterisation of Blaise, good going on making a peripheral character so rich. (character wise not money) Loved the curse you put on Mrs Zabini, it fits with your story well.

So not liking Bumbledork at the moment. You've done a great job at making him a manipulative dick. Keeping Harry away from his only blood wizarding relative, and Harry not knowing he had any. Fuckin Bumbles! Enjoying Harry standing up to Dorky and not being as blindly trusting as before. "The Greater Good" that Bumbles loves so much. (Whenever I hear or think of that phrase I remember the movie Hot Fuzz, always makes me smile) Which also relates to Ron (the not trusting thing), especially after the nightmare where his dorm mates heard him sy the killing curse. Neville has been painted in a really positive and not so bumbling light. You can see him growing up and Ron is the one being left behind.

Ginny. Well the little skank is getting what she deserves, she is really appearing to be a younger Molly in the making. LOL bet she just thought she could bat her eyes at Harry and he would become her lap dog. (I like Ginny but your negative portrayl is good) Hmm the Slytherins Daphne and Tracey? very likable. Loved their first interaction with Harry on the train, they're very much in the background but well written characters. Hermione, you've really put her in the middle. She's letting the Weasley's drag her around and not learning about the old ways, just taking their word. I like how you've made her stand up to Ron and go to Harry's training session. Nice to see her come to support her friend, especially since he's always been there for her.

Can't wait for your next update.

Since I've praised you so much, now for the concrit... I noticed a couple of spelling errors and also where you're writing so fast you missed a word. Do you have a beta? One thing I do to help me make sure I use the right word and don't skip a word is wait a day after I write a chapter to read it through before posting.

I think in one of your author notes you said something about being new to hp fandom. If this is your first story, you're doing brilliantly

Keep up the good work and more please *grin*

Wow! Thank you for the update. I really love how this is progressing. I'm sure this with Ron will come to a head soon if he keeps up with the attitude. Will Harry join Blaise's coven soon?

UGH!!! I sooo didn't want it to end. I was so hoping that when I got to the new chapter I would see the page cursor thing be so small you couldn't see the lines in the middle, but sadly no such luck. That said it was still a nice length. The story just gets deeper and deeper. I so wish that this was a finished book I could buy and put in my library to read and reread. Your writing style is up to par with some of my favorite authors being published now. If you ever write a story that is totally yours and it gets published, please let me know so I can go out and but it asap.

Hi! I've read your story from Chapter 1 until the lastest chapter now, and I am infatuated with the story. I love the plot, the unusual pairings, the pureblood religion, the fact that Harry really does have family, and the fact that while you don't BASH the Weasleys you don't paint them in such a saintly manner as others have. Oh, and you don't leave Neville and Luna being just names with an occasional voice here and there. Please update again soon. Your story truly is marvelous! (Is there a mailing list for updates? I'd love to be a part of that, if possible. Thanks.)

This is a wonderful update. I wonder if Harry will be ambushed by his "friends" back in the tower?

I'm really liking this story! I hope I get to see much more of it. Of course, I also like very much the update schedule! LOL