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for What a Vacation Can Do

by alosercanwin

person Anon
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well going by that it doesn't look like Pansy and Hermione are going to get along but I hope that they do, just for something different, you know? Either way, I'm intrigued as to what will happen next. Of course Pansy is going to fail in keeping them apart. LOL
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is this inspired by the Winslet & Diaz film The Holiday? If so, good choice of inspiration. Pity the bloke is someone as uninspiring as Draco, though I am glad it's not Harry or Ron. There really is a shortage of mature (i.e. both responsible and hot) men in Hermione's year, isn't there?
person Snakekat
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how you are developring this story, good start.
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well, funny turn of events....I like the humor infused throughout....
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's very sad about her parents, but ah, the plot thickens. :)
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, something different. Is there actually a possibility of Hermione and Pansy being civil (or maybe even friendly) towards one another? And I love the idea of rebuilding after the war. Wondering how well Hermione is going to be received when she releases her parents from their spell and the background thought of Draco wanting to side with Potter during the war if he thought he had the chance too. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. :)
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So far it's intriguing. I'm looking forward to reading more!
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning.