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for What a Vacation Can Do

by alosercanwin

schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story so far I adore it. I can't wait for an update, hopefully a very soon update! *wink*
Do you think you will be telling of Pansy's little adventure in Australia as well maybe finding someone there while Hermione and Draco are getting together? that would be Interesting. But whatever you do I'm sure I will LOVE it! :) remember updates!! ^_- *thumbs up*
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. interesting revelation. but why was draco so interested in getting hermione to go on a date with him. how he did it showed he's definately a Slytherin. Like it. Please update again soon. I love how quickly you update. ;)
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco -- you charmer you...I'm laughing as I write this....great update.

PS: you need to check the spacing...it was so hard to read. It all ran together like a huge run-on sentence.
person Angela
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just want to tell you I love your story! Can't wait for the next chapter because I am HOOKED! :)
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
let the fun begin. I can't believe Hermione would fall for the Gryffindor bravery so easily but it's also not something she can back down from without hurting her pride.
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great first meeting...LMAO at how he wants to "make it" with Hermione. Such a male. I think Hermione finds him attractive as well.

One small typo -- I think you meant "ridiculous" when you wrote "ridicules". Yes? Thanks for the update.
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha tricksy little Draco. However if he thinks Hermione is just an easy score he is so wrong. Please continue!
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
and so it begins...yay, they might be friends....
person Hello
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. Can't wait for the inevitable "fireworks". :)

schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Methinks he doth protest too much. What will he do when he realizes hermione granger is all grows up....alls grows up. LOL.