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for An Accident in Time

by CiraArana

person 12blue12
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So good i loved this story.. though the ending could have had little more added to it *wink wink*
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WAHOOO severous tahat right take what you want. I think they will be happy together lol very nice.
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHOA.. I was totally stunned by this story! There definitely needs to be a sequel! I will wait patiently if you do! :D

-Si
person koki
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very good,
kept me thinking when theyre gonna get it on or something bad would happen.
person JanisJ
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! I read it all this afternoon (and grumbled about any and all interruptions just so I could get back to it sooner) but I couldn't tear myself away. What a great NEW take on Snarry! It had all the elements I love: magic, canon events (but twisted to make a great plot), believable characters + dialogue, longing, uncontrollable boners and of course, consummation!-- Whee!

I'd beg for more or an update or an epilogue, but I know how it is.... you did a spectacular oneshot and I should be happy with that.... but that doesn't stop me from hoping....

REALLY, great job! Keep on writing! You've got talent :)
person Elvira
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved it! It was so amazing, I loved Sev in the end.
person circe266
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your depiction of Snape as a teenager was so perfect. I'm glad they found their happy ending.