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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Strange, but coherent, kind of like it.
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Thank you for this! Great story idea. Every situation you put them all in was quite believable, and very funny. This reminds me of that episode in Buffy where she's in Hospital and her parents and the doctors are trying to reach her and get her to understand that everything about her being a Slayer is a lie, and she's made it all up, including her friends, and it's all in her head, lol. Well done!
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
crazy but readable, very readable
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome, well-written story with a truly original idea. I love how you worked so many characters and canon situations into the context of the asylum. Nice work!
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Noir-tinged start, please continue
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, great work! I love all the subtle name and situation changes, and although Hermione doesn't seem really insane, the story still makes sense. Definitely one of my fav one-shots. :D
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I liked it a great deal. What an interesting premise, I have thought on occasion while reading Harry Potter that it was a bit mad, but this just takes it to a whole different level. I think you should continue with the story, have a good day
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a-fucking-mazing!!! I absolutely LOVE your story! I cannot wait to read more from you, very inventive with character adaptation and your Hermoine is so wonderful to relate to, please keep up with your work!
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was too funny. I wish it wasn't a one-shot. What was Hermione in for anyway?
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story -- quite an original concept. I like the way you blended humor, canon characters and situations, and a sexy lemon.
Nicely done!
Nicely done!