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person NessaC
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I was a little skeptical about the bdsm theme as I don't know much about it (thanks for the author's note by the way, it really helped clear some things up :). I like that it's not completely PWP, but at the same time, it was a nice quick read, unlike some fantastic but very lengthy stories on here. The plot that wormed itself into it gave it more structure, which I think enhanced the story. Great job :)

~Spiritxx

PS. I did pick up on Draco's grief re:Severus. Is there a possibility for a spin-off oneshot perhaps?
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!
person scymnus
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I truly enjoyed reading this story. Great characterization and lovely depiction of the relationship. 5/5!
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this story!
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you know,when I write,I just write. So reading the author notes was really helpful to me,gives me an insight to what you should and shouldn't do when you write about this pair. I wpould love for you to read my pieces, or one, or two,but I don't think they are a tenth as good, sadly.
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really found this story to be an interesting and very captivating one. For someone like myself who thinks that having someone to release control around would be an interesting venture, this story really helped. I loved every minute I spent reading it. Absolutely fabulous work and I particularly enjoyed how you explained your reasoning behind the story. Often many authors say they like to leave their stories open to interpretation. Personally I love it when authors make the decision and tell the readers the way the wished for their story to be interpreted. I look forward to reading more from you and your partner(s).
person zozobozo
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*crys* I cant believe its over, well it was fantastic while it lasted. Once again I loved the character development you had in the story (even if it wasnt deliberate) It was so sweet how Draco came to accept his and Harrys feelings on the tower in the snow. I thought that there would be more commotion with Harry telling Ron and Hermione, but I guess that you were ending the story up so it was good as a conclusion and to see Harrys acceptance of Draco into all aspects of his life.

Im sure you wont do a sequel as much as I would love to see one, but maybe a prequel of Draco and Snape, just a snapshot of their development.

Once again thanks for the great story keep it up :)
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily*
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still love :D
person jj
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMg i keep checking back to see if you updated. The best part was ch 10. I wish u elongated draco;s resentment. like maybe get a 3rd guy hit lon harry n draco gets jealous and cant do anythin. or maybe now that harry is back, he has trust issues.