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A powerful story. I'm looking forward to the next installment - hopefully soon!

Just a few things I noticed: some small spelling errors and a sentence or two with a missing adverb. Other than that, very nicely done!

He is blind, she loves him and he is blind............ Men they are so stupid some times.........

I'm still loving this, and the slow pace you've set. My heart really breaks for both of them, I can't wait to see what happens next. Lovely!

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!! I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Wow, that's crazy all the wounds he ended up with. Understandable why he's acting up. A year has past! That's crazy. :) Really liked the chapter and can't wait for the next update. Will there be Hermione's side of the story or is this going to be only Draco's point of view? Anyway, hope you update soon. :)

This is obviously not a piece of lighthearted fluff - Draco's emotions are so raw and intense it even breaks my heart to read them. So filled with self-doubt, so sure he is unworthy of love just because the face in the mirror isn't one he recogises. So focused on all the negatives as I imagine anyone who has suffered through such a horrific incident both physically and mentally surely would. I don't know where you're channelling all this deep-seated pain from, but it's coming through brilliantly in your story. And Hermione, well it is clear she blames herself for Draco's predicament and she is going through her own personal hell too. I'm hoping this is more than a Florence Nightingale complex because I can already see the others accusing her of this should she show any sign of caring for him more than she already does. Oh I can't wait to see what's next. :) Loving it!

Great story and very interesting. Can't wait for the next update. :)

Don't leave us in suspense....! Update soon!

Chilling...and mysterious. The perfect beginning to what can only be another fabulous story!

I was enraptured that when I found out there wasn't another chapter to turn to I literally let a "Ughhhhh" of frustration!

This is going to be good....very, very good!!!

Please update soon!

xo
dM

Wow, girl! When you start a new story, you certainly do it with a bang! Those two chapters were a great beginning. I can't wait to see what more you've got in store for us and read the explanations I am sure are coming. Poor, Draco... no longer perfect. Poor, Hermione... the guilt she must live with (which he, of course, just enhanced). Sigh... Looking forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva