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for Cause And Effect

by darkpyroangel06

schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An inspiring and beautifully written story. I feel privileged to have been able to read it. I do hope that you will continue to write Harry Potter fan fiction.

My sincerest condolences to you regarding your mother.
person Nemesis
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this fic. Thanks for writing this and showing me that Snape-as-Harry's-guardian fics can actually be interesting. I hope you keep writing HP fanfiction.
person mjd
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Simply put; you made me cry.
You did an excellent job on this story.
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Depressing but interesting. Why didn't Harry come out more emotionally stunted than he was? The drastic change in mood at the end of the story was discomfitting. Maybe tone down the ending a bit, by stopping at the point where Severus starts reaching out?