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by Gypsii

schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow!

another story to look forward to.. :)

please update soon
person Antonova
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great! update please!!
person Gypsii
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
げんきですか AncientDancer? LOL. You just want to beta so you can read my story first in class....we shall talk tomorrow.
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If Professor Snape was talking about Harry when he mentioned 'silver eyes and black hair' then he did not notice that Harry's eyes are green, just like his mother Lily's. Snape would have known this, considering how attached he was to Harry's mother.
Good start, then. Continue
person Gypsii
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
pirategrrl: After reading your comment, I realized that I had forgotten to add the paragraph that goes more into detail about his disguise. As it was mentioned twice, Harry is using a glamour for a disguise, giving him silver eyes instead of his trademark green. I will be adding the missing paragraph to the chapter tonight. Look forward for chapter 2 coming sometime at the end of the week. Thanks for reviewing and catching this for me!