rate_review Reviews

That was... very creepy, in all the right ways. Harry/Bella is such a perfect pairing, so underappreciated in the fanfiction world, and it's nice to find something as well written and beautiful as this. The eloquence of your comments (which, by the way, positively screamed talent) led me to your profile which, in turn, led me to this. You do not disappoint, my dear.

great story,

it funny how hermoine belives that ron help harry, when he save him It was much safer for him when he managed to get Ron to attend these things. His friend had his troubles, but at least he knew when to step in and pull Harry back from his fever
ron is the one that pull him back,


and i feel sorry for ron harry has ron and hermoine,, ron only has harry hermoine can not stand him now.

Oh wow, I love it, More please

The psychology of this is fascinating. You really delve into the base forces at the heart of the three character: strip them to their essences. It's a very powerful, thought-forcing piece. The ending and the Harry/Bellatrix make me want to knock some sense into Harry. Horrible way to end it.

What I especially like is the way you are successful in tying the trio together, showing their alternating power and horrible vulnerability, as they connect and break apart from each other.

Hm. It's good. Very good.

This is one of the darkest psychological stories I've ever read. Some parts still make me shudder. You do such a great job describing everyone's pain and how they're coping (or not) with the aftermath of the torture and sexual degradation. Just WOW. I feel so bad for Harry, especially. I almost hope Bellatrix kills him. Really great writing, Kitty.

Oh I read this again. I thought this was a multi chapter story not a onshot. Any way it's well done and well written. Can't wait to see whats next.
Pete