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for Ceremonies of Strife

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
[Had a longer reply, but it wouldn't post and I lost it.]
CH33: So many faces, so little time. I'm glad Draco made it time and that Harry was holding his own.

Is it time for Harry to worry about Draco loosing control?
person polka dot
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh a hive mind so Nihil is like the Borg. I really liked the Borg
person KadyRae
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! update...?
person rafiq
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are there any auror trainers who don't have a secret agenda? Was Aran's spell to remove the 'dark shimmer of necromancy' from Harry's head? Are the others Portillo Lopez's group?
person angelmuziq
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh another plot twist! I love it, always leaving me desperate for more. What has Harry gotten into this time? And I hope that Draco will find him and help and then kick that Auror's butt. I do so love a vengeful Draco out to protect Harry. Another great chapter. My appetite for your stories has been quenched for now. lol. Cant wait for the next installment.
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch32: What?!? I guess asking to dodge a bullet for a third time was asking too much... Who's side is this instructor on? Aura, Nihil, Lopez, or maybe even another side, Necromancers?
person polka dot
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry it seems like someone's always out to get him.
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 33!!! What did that spell just do? Why did he cast it? Sooooo need more!!!
person SP777
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #32....

*whispers* I see dead people...

Okay, I couldn't resist, but it DOES make sense considering
what Harry had done.

By the way, do your Latin words have meaning or are you making
them up as you go along.

....and is there a third installment still or will it be condensed
to a mini chaptered story...just a few chapters to bring it home?

...AND how long do you see this second part being?
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch31: Boy, after dodging one bullet, Harry had to dodge another.
I'm glad Draco didn't just walk away when he found out there was another secret kept from him.
Nice group dynamic. They now have someone in the group itching for a fight, the main four never have that fire in them. They need Ventus for that. It's nice to see a character that has the skills to survive being part of their group.