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CH 34: Another mad man, if you can call him that, obsessed with Harry... How will Harry and Draco deal with this new threat of Draco going too dark for Harry. It's funny how the shoe is on the other foot. Harry is worried about Draco going dark and Draco not seeing it in that way, in fact Draco sees it as a way to save the work. Just like Harry was using necromancy...

If there's one thing I decided on is this...once you see an idea, you
definitely know how to work it. You go girl!!! :-p
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about #34...

1. I didn't realize this until you wrote, but I truly miss the Slytherin
side of Draco Malfoy. We need a balance between goody-goody & straight
malice.

2. How in the world did you come up with the Nemo & Nusquam
explanation? Did you bounce ideas off someone?

3. When you think about it, I wish Harry would get to know Draco's
personality more and REALIZE that the boy used to be a Slytherin!

Draco is quite capable of handling..or I should say...DOING the
deeds that would be uncomfortable to those who came from a
house of HIGH morale and STILL remain unfazed.

Harry, Ron & Hermione need to realize that they need someone who isn't
afraid to get their hands dirty.

I'd say more on it, but it's late...

Anyway, I liked this chapter, it had the right amount of tension &
there was no sugar-coating during Harry & Draco's 'confrontation'.
Though I was curious to know if they would have dared to duel
each other to prove who's right.


nuff said...

Oh I like chaos and the whole everything to nothingness, yeah he's cool in my book.

Man. I love Draco like this. So badass. Harry's ideals and morals seem like they'd be a problem even if they weren't interrogating Aran. Aurors would have to do this on the field too I would think. Draco now seems like he's best suited for the job. It's a hard choice to make to hurt someone like that. But generally the best if they say nothing normal works on them.

Excellent job! *looks around* Well, this story has certainly progressed in my reviewing absence. It gladens me to finally hear of Draco's self-realization, an excellent step 'into being' as you put it. Outstanding job!!!!!!

Soooo need chapter 34!!!

I hope they finally get some answers this time... very intriguing chapter! I am assuming that Aran's un humanness means he is working with Nihil?

Ohhhh Draco finally stepping up. I kinda like it. Especially in regards to Harry. *wiggles eyebrows* lol. Cant wait to see how this turns out. Arrogant Draco can be hot but dangerous.

about #33...

*whines* Monaaa...when are you going to do Wolf in the Making??? *pouts*
You can't put something that intriguing out and leave folks hanging!

Will it be after the third part of this series or in the middle of it?
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If I recall, I think I was asking what the spell meant or, basically,
just for the TRANSLATION [in a nutshell]. It doesn't have to be the
exact meaning or accurate.

You know, the part where Draco was questioning Aran and everyone
seemed to freeze.

My first thought was 'Slytherin'.

Would it be something if everyone in Slytherin were taught since third year
how to intently question someone or get them to listen with the intensity
of a snake? The way a cobra hypnotizes its prey before it strikes...

I always thought you would have done that with Harry, with him being
a Parselmouth. Give him the ability to 'hypnotize' with his Parsel language,
since the hissing IS similar to a snake, but that's something I think deserves
its own setting in a different story. Don't cha' think?

I forgot about this story for a long time, and I have to say I did not regret it. Not because the story isn't good; no no no no. Because I got to read 33 chapters of it all at once, and it all be brand new to me. =3 I love this. Now if ONLY Sirius would just rise from the dead, mind and body... and be happy about it!

Damn; I know it'll not happen... but... T_T I loves me some Sirius.