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for Ceremonies of Strife

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch36: Oh, love the look between Harry and Draco that says Draco knows when Harry is going to lie.

So, Harry can randomly pop in and out on someone... or no one, as the case may be. If it was Draco in the bedroom, this would be a great ability...
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 37!!!
person SP777
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #36...

1. May I ask where in the world did you find the word 'comitatus'?

2. You know, for a second I thought you were going to show us
a twisted horror scene in the..cave?...from your demented mind. :-)

Bones, blood and all...you have to admit it HAS been a while
since you've done a horror story. Maybe you'll give us one for
October? :-)

..all in all, I'm glad Catherine was a friend [of sorts] to Draco and
hadn't betrayed him.
person NessaC
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have just spent the last three days or so, reading a Soldier's Welcome, and now this, and I'm terribly disappointed to have caught up to your posting. On the other hand, your storytelling abilities are absolutely breathtaking! Angsty, realistic, believable.... I could go on. The characters have true personalities, and the tensions between Draco and Harry are handled perfectly.

I'm very very impressed, and I can't wait to get my hands on the next chapters :)

Major kudos and cookies!!

~Spiritxx
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch35: Oh no! Not another mad man in Harry's head sending him visions. So I wonder if Harry can see through Nihil, can Nihil see through him? Assuming the end of the chapter is that.

Interesting that people being "controlled" by Nihil can still have some freedom, until he notices and kills their body.

Yay! More compatible magic training.
person KadyRae
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cliff hanger! ack! :) Cant wait to see what Nihil is up to now... although likely something nefarious. Everytime I catch your chapters, its always right before the update thing, so when I go to reviw, it tells me to play pac man instead :p ill hav to work at reading your updates earlier! lol.

I have no idea how this whole thing with Nihil is going to work... The farther into the story we get, the less likely it seems that they will find a way to kill him, that there even IS a way to kill him... Cant wait to see what it is! Does the final battle happen in this fic, or in the third section?
person SP777
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #35...

Okay, I give up! What the HELL is up with Ventus?????

BUT, it would be freakin' ironic if the five of them wind
up working together in the future as older adults.

...and I'm glad to see the 'Fellowship' are finally making
a move. Almost forgot about them.

You know, Harry's connection to Nihil...is it somewhat
similar to what it was like with Voldermort. Visions?
Seeing unpleasant experiences?
person MewMew2
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting................... So Harry's connection to Nihl is evolving eh? How will this affect his compatible magic I wonder. Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the chance.
person polka dot
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Dearborn had compatible magic with his brother. It would seem to fit, but then he should have been able to save him.
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm worried now.