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for Ceremonies of Strife

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry does seem very weak in this. He did defeat Voldermort. He is a powerful wizard. I don't think that he would easily be defeated by an auror instructor.
person qwerty
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! So that's what happened. Your version was way more interesting than mine!
Keep writing!
person SP777
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #42...

I can see right now, I'll have to reread this to get a
better visual on what just happened, but this was interesting.

Though there was NO actual fight, the idea of 'shadow' was
definitely different..completely unexpected.

I'm curious to see how you end this story. :-)
person purple-er
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gripping.
Hermione is a teary-eyed loser though. :P
person SP777
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #41...

1. Didn
person NessaC
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fair enough :)

From the moment the letter came and Harry & Draco figured out what was wrong with Lucius's death, I started to wonder if Nihil had a hand in it. Looks like that was the case! I like the illustration of the wards over Malfoy Manor, and their transference to Draco as the heir/Lord thereof.

Hopefully the wand works!!

~Spiritxx
person qwerty
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So crazy! And so excited for the next chapter!
Something had to have happened to Lucius for Draco to have control of the Manor's wards already. And the fact that the so-called golem tried to escape and then died is so suspicious. Did Nihil make a creation and the real Lucius was still in Azkaban all this time??!
Keep going!
person polka dot
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well I can't say I would be at all surprised is Lopez tricked Harry
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 41!!!
person MewMew2
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating once more. On the subject of Malfoy Snr's 'escape and death' from Azkaban, I am very interested to find out his motives/methods for the particulars of the illusion chosen. Perhaps he is aided by Ministry officials who think their wallets are too light, and in fact his illusion only lasted in the cell and did not escape?