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for Ceremonies of Strife

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #6....

1. Why do I want to be a War Wizard so much?

-damn, that sounds almost like, ''Why do you want to work for
this company? What do you have to offer?'' I've always hated that
part of the interview, made you feel like you were 10 yrs. old if you
didn't have a good answer.

2. Can I just say I'm in love with that fire dancer? It reminds me
of McCaffrey's fire lizards. Wish I had one. *gets twinkly-eyed*

3. Aha! I KNEW something was up with Lopez when you showed
that symbol the first time! Besides there ARE 3 of them, but I
just can't remember the third name that you mentioned awhile back.
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Im really trying to wrap my brains around what the heck Harry is thinking. How can bringing the dead back to life no matter the reason ever be a good thing. How can he think that they would be the same person that they were before they died. What about a person soul or the fact that he would be essential their master in a way? I know that he is sort of naive still but he should be beyond outright stupidity.

Beyond Harry driving me crazy, I love this fic and every other fic you have written. I rejoice in every new chapter and am always on edge until the very end. I can't wait for more!
person SP777
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

'...and listen as the proud lion stands his ground and roars his
displeasure to his pride'

...yeah, that's Harry, a strong young man, who has definitely come
into his own over the years, even if he feels unsure at times....
and make mistakes [ritual + dead = STUPID].

This is the Harry I never see in stories, most stories give me the feeling
that Harry is STILL that akward teenager who is still unsure of his actions
OR even if he IS slightly older, you never see the transition of HOW he
got there.

You seem to be the ONLY author I've seen who actually takes Harry through
different journeys that MAKE him go up.

Are you concious of that or you're just going with the flow?

By the way, how old is everyone now?
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5: Wow a break through with Draco, but a scary step for Harry. I hope he doesn't find an army of alive again wizards at his door step one morning.
person qwerty
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this sequel; it's such a great story! The last line "Harry fell asleep after long hours of alternating between hesitation and intense guilt that he was lying here, alive, with his lover, and other people weren
person Chidee
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have thought that Nihil using hallow stone to raise the death..
person polka dot
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that Ron isn't capable of thinking ahead and draco isn't capable of apologizing, but they are young. They can learn.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Harry fell asleep after long hours of alternating between hesitation and intense guilt that he was lying here, alive, with his lover, and other people weren
person Sarah
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah on harry putting his foot down :) Cant wait for more!
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...I can't wait to see the nuclear explosion in the coming chapter! Excellent story, as always!