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for Ceremonies of Strife

by Lomonaaeren

person qwerty
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I cannot wait for the last book in the trilogy!
Interesting, a "return" ability? I wonder what that could be... return from the dead?? Hmm
That Holder chick is definitely going to be a pain in the butt in the next book, I can tell.
Nihil was probably looking for Harry specifically, which is why he attacked the barracks instead of the Ministry... or it's part of some other nefarious plot that has yet to be revealed lol
Great job! I really enjoyed reading this (and your other works too!) and I'm looking forward to the finale!
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CH44: Oh, they missed out on all the action! Well, they had their own action to deal with... A binding spell! I wouldn't think they would do that until they were sure he was who he claimed to be. I wonder if they were the target or maybe the book they had?
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 45!!!!
person SP777
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #44...con't

Yes, yes Draco...to be in love with an idiot
is SUCH a huge sacrifice. But, you know you'll
do anything for him. :-)

Man, it's been awhile since we had a chapter
that held such anticipation, even Harry's fight
with Nihil didn't have such a nail-biting, not
to say it wasn't good, but still...

One other thing, I'm sure you think...or hope..
folks have forgotten, BUT what's the deal on
Severus' pensieve??? You never mentioned it
again. Will it be important later?
person polka dot
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would think Lopez could explain their disappearance, but they have been holding out on their info. on Nihil to the Aurors so they probably deserve to be treated like enemies.
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 44!!!!
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch43: Oh, grief sex? Comfort sex? It threw me off when Draco told the house elves to ready bed rooms... or was it only the bed room? So even bottoming, Draco tops. *snickers*

I can't wait to find out more about Harry's version of Necromancy.
person NessaC
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Makes sense.
Now to try and make the rest of the world understand that...
Great chapter :)

~Spiritxx
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CH42: Nice chapter. Loved how Harry fought to find out the true for Draco. Interesting that the wand attacked the shadow, he was dead and yet not dead... Love how to snake protected Harry without Harry having to actually do anything.
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 41: Wow, twists and turns. Great chapter! Wait, not Lucius, but Lucius in the service of... part of...

I like how Harry hadn't thought about using his new power which is powered by illusions and the illusions are Lucius' specialty... I just hope the wand doesn't attack Harry instead.