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for Ceremonies of Strife

by Lomonaaeren

person MewMew2
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! And a question to the roar, Nhill?
person polka dot
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Draco I'm almost twice as old and still don't have a clue what to do with my life.
person mariahs_fantasy
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked chapter 9, was kinda excited to see what they would be learning with Lowell and Weston. Its interesting to see the extent Draco would go through for power; the alarms i felt ringing because of Harry's necromantic desires were kinda ringing for Draco's search on Greek magic too. So i wanted to ask you: will Draco's obsession affect Harry/people as dangerously as Harry's obesssion has the potential to do? With Harry's, it seemed obvious to some reviewers how dangerous that can be, but Draco's is a more subtle, though not uncommon, danger.

Also, wanted to say I actually appreciated the chap where Harry finds out about the meaning of Portillo Lopez's tattoo. Felt like a cliffie (you and your cliffies!), but also, when i read that, i instantly thought, "Oh shit, Harry! She's gonna be after you too!" Will she/others, in this or the next installment, ever discover Harry's dealings with necromancy, or will the chiding strictly be within his circle of friends (Draco/Ron/Hermione)? 'Cuz we all know Harry deserves a chiding, Lol.
person SP777
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #8...

1. So, basically a War Wizard's critieria is similar to the Marines in a
way? In other words, the Marines standards are higher than the Navy which
are higher than the Army.

2. Who in the world did you base Santoro on???

3. Now that was a very spontaneous way for you to end it. Good job.
You got me more intrigued than usual I think I might combust with
anticipation. :-)

..and if you haven't guessed, I'm messing with you. :-]
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now would Draco love Harry leading an army of the dead? Think of all the power they would have...

Ch8:lol. An insightful Harry stump Draco.
I can't wait for the compatible magic training.
Oddly enough, I missed Arrowshot. I can't wait to find out what happened to her.
person paigeey07
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol, more please.... :)
person polka dot
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco reached too far, he should have politely inquired about an application process and then Harry and Him could think about it more. after all it sounds like a decent living. Only work during wartime
person MewMew2
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Thank you for posting once more, please do so again when you have the opportunity to do so. Nice job on the title of this chapter in particular.
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8!!!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Darn, I kept thinking he was freaked out because Draco would find out it was him doing all this. I'll have to reread everything.

Ch7: Back to school! I can't wait to see when they interact with in the partnership trust class. Will they be learning to interact with others and not just themselves...