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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #13...
I'm so glad you FINALLY let them have that conversation.
In the back of my mind, I was HOPING you'd let Harry hear
how Draco still feels about Muggleborn, because I think they
need to get that out in the open, so they can deal with it and in
Draco's case, get a 'little' open-minded.
...and why does Harry think he got off easy with Draco??? :-)
I'm so glad you FINALLY let them have that conversation.
In the back of my mind, I was HOPING you'd let Harry hear
how Draco still feels about Muggleborn, because I think they
need to get that out in the open, so they can deal with it and in
Draco's case, get a 'little' open-minded.
...and why does Harry think he got off easy with Draco??? :-)
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just read the 13 chapters at one sitting. pretty good.
you already know you're a great writer, but no harm in saying it again.
Harry's obsession with necromancy is extremely believable. It's a surprise that so few writers explore this.
you already know you're a great writer, but no harm in saying it again.
Harry's obsession with necromancy is extremely believable. It's a surprise that so few writers explore this.
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry's got a big dark secret, oohhhh.
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About your reply to my comment... I don't remember saying anything about Portillo Lopez being possessed...
Ch12: What? I'm more confused about the tentacle than Draco is now. Oh Harry.... So communication is the key...
Ch12: What? I'm more confused about the tentacle than Draco is now. Oh Harry.... So communication is the key...
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 13!!!
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #12....
1. Okay, I'm not in the story and even Pushkin had me
wanting to bang my head a couple times, dealing with
him is like pulling teeth. O_o
2. You know what, the section when Harry was practicing
the 'Idiot' ritual to the session with Draco, I don't
know WHY, but it felt like it jumped from time frame to
time frame unexpectedly.
Like watching a movie that skips from scene to scene, but
you're not sure if it's the same day or not.
That was my first impression...were you trying to make it flow
in a certain way?
3. I think I 'get' what HE is trying to do, what it all boils
down to is this....,it's more than JUST revenge, HE wants to forget.
1. Okay, I'm not in the story and even Pushkin had me
wanting to bang my head a couple times, dealing with
him is like pulling teeth. O_o
2. You know what, the section when Harry was practicing
the 'Idiot' ritual to the session with Draco, I don't
know WHY, but it felt like it jumped from time frame to
time frame unexpectedly.
Like watching a movie that skips from scene to scene, but
you're not sure if it's the same day or not.
That was my first impression...were you trying to make it flow
in a certain way?
3. I think I 'get' what HE is trying to do, what it all boils
down to is this....,it's more than JUST revenge, HE wants to forget.
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dissection, Harry really should have gone it would have been a productive learning experience. I'm all for it, when it's not cute animals being dissected.
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #11...
About time you started showing your sadistic side again! :-)
Keeps us on our toes...on the edge of our seats...and mentally
screaming.
Got a bad feeling though if Harry DOES keep on the path to
Necromancy, he's going up against Lopez {a simple nay or aye
will do}.
Though I have a hunch what he's learning will come in handy.
By the way, what WOULD be the purpose of turning the world into
nothingness?
About time you started showing your sadistic side again! :-)
Keeps us on our toes...on the edge of our seats...and mentally
screaming.
Got a bad feeling though if Harry DOES keep on the path to
Necromancy, he's going up against Lopez {a simple nay or aye
will do}.
Though I have a hunch what he's learning will come in handy.
By the way, what WOULD be the purpose of turning the world into
nothingness?
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch11: Oh, Harry caught, but able to bluff his way out... I hope that isn't his last chance to stop. Oi! He's dead or in a new body? Maybe the one that rushed in to tell them he's dead is now him? Can't wait to find out what they find out about the tentacles.
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February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well of course harry has delusions of grandeur, he was practically bred that way