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I'm not sure I like the new girl. I do want Draco to make a friend, but she's awfully pushy

Thank you for updating once more! I must say, I'm very intrigued by Ventras and her particular motivation. Draco leading the resistance? Not a thought that really occurred to me. HPff readers (like myself) have become so used to Harry being the 'chosen one' and 'leader of all things' that I don't think that other characters play long lasting leadership roles in our minds; thank you for presenting the possibility of another leader in this war. Exellent job.

about #21...

1. Damn, I had forgotten myself this story started off with them
training...TO..BE...Aurors, with all the stuff going on.

...and damn, Ventus is kind of eerie. O_o

2. You know, that grovel idea IS a good idea. But, how would you
pull it off? Because, at this point, Draco has gone from being hurt to
being spiteful.

Oh, now will Harry muster up the courage to tell Draco about the fits?


Ch20: I'm guessing it was Harry's love for Draco that saved him... Since it seems that it was Draco's memories of Harry and their love that gave him a chance to get to Harry. Interesting chapter. I liked it.

I adore this fic and I can't wait for the next installment. I hope Harry does get Draco back (even though he is a lying git). ^^

about #20...

You know, I ain't got much to say on this one, but it's moving in
an interesting direction.

But, I AM looking forward to an in-depth conversation between
Harry & Draco concerning the issue that is...them.

...oh and while I'm at it, let me plant THIS one in your head for
the upcoming future...and don't roll your eyes...with ALL your
focus on Harry & Draco, did you forget that Hermione had used
the time turner in the past and is a few years older [give or take]?
Now do something with THAT idea!

*snaps fingers* :-p

Before I forget, I was reading a past story of yours and the one
thing I miss you doing is sex scenes. Your scenes were more than
just physical, there was a commitment between people AND the desire
to f*** a person into unconciousness. I don't think I've read
that much athletic sex in stories lately.

Ch19: Oh, Draco maybe angry at Harry, but there are no secrets between them now... Sounds like Draco is trying not to believe Harry's apology, but wants and is partially. I love how Draco can tell what they are talking about just by looking at Hermione's face.

about #19..

Part of me wants to say 'Poor Harry', the other part is laughing
its ass off 'That's what you get!' *evil cackle*

By the by, was that the adapted version of the exercise I told
you about...wizarding style?

Ch18: Poor Harry. Oh, I got that Harry would stop when Hermione said she'd keep him close to stop him from doing it. I love how Hermione talked to Draco as if he should understand everything she was saying and not saying, like he was a friend that should know.

I'm a bit confused by the vision Harry had in the end. Was it new or rehashing what he saw in a new light?

Can't really blame Draco, he's run away from his family and put all his trust in Harry. It definitely hurts not to have that reciprocated.