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There is no getting around it. I don't like Ventus. I suppose she is just that type.

Oh I definitely don't like Ventus, she's pushy and she seems to be sneaky as well. Probably a slytherin.

How did Ventus manage to steal something from the war wizards? I have a feeling Lucius is about to come back into the story soon, but will he have to "die" in Azkaban first?

Ch23: Good chapter. I'm glad they are finally taking the first step together. This should also help them in the compatible magic lessons.

Well, FINALLY some progress! I was beginning to think 'Was he
EVER going to hear Harry's side of it?????'

..and I was beginning to wonder what significant other or
co-worker pissed YOU off to the point of needing to vent in your
story. [Emphasis on the words 'beginning to wonder'...]

All in all, I'm glad they're moving forward.

lovely they made up (should have kissed and made up) now I'm sure Nihil will attack again

about #22...

You know, after reading this chapter, I started to feel a tad
bit...depressed.

I understand Draco feels hurt, but it feels like a Slytherin
grudge now. 'You beat me at Quidditch, I can't stand you...'
or 'You have higher marks than me, I can't stand you...'

You'd think Harry cheated on him or something. How come Draco
hasn't realized that Harry needs help, instead of abandonment?

Did Draco Malfoy put ALL trust & faith in Harry so much that he feels
laid bare???

Good grief, what happened to the Slytherin from Hogwarts??? The Snake
from Slytherin would have bounced back, distibuted No Tolerance, and let
Harry have a piece of his mind AND demanded he look at his problem, all
the while letting Harry know he will help him, but Harry would have to
make most of the effort himself...with Draco's loving support in a
'painful' manner. :-)

But, that's just me thinking out loud.

Ch22: Poor Draco is still in a tail spin. I hope the meeting turns out better than I think it will... Unless there is an attack....

Poor Harry and Draco have to fight with themselves before they can fight with each other.

damn if Draco wants Blackmail material then he'll get loads of it, but I have a feeling it will be more along the lines of finding out just how long Harry's been deceiving Draco.

Ch21: Oh... a view point from a ?friend? on Draco's side... But grovelling? That could go to Draco's head... both of them. Draco doesn't even know what he wants from Harry. He wanted an apology, but wont listen. He doesn't want them to end, but wont listen. Harry is doomed. (Well, I hope not.) How do you repair what wont go along with it?