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April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty intense! im excited for the rest of the battle!
hoping for a steamy scene soon too.....:)
How did Nahil manage the two bodies fighting each other at once thing? Does he have the power to be in two bodies at once, or was it illusion, or.... :D
hoping for a steamy scene soon too.....:)
How did Nahil manage the two bodies fighting each other at once thing? Does he have the power to be in two bodies at once, or was it illusion, or.... :D
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Didn't see that one coming! What a crazy twist! So pumped for the next chapter!
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It seems that Draco would be the last one Dearborn would have been willing to mentor unless he wanted to hurt him, but he always went after Harry so I guess I'm not getting it.
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Isn't hell just about to rain down on them? They need each other more than ever.
Ch 29: About Nihil.... What?!?
Ch 29: About Nihil.... What?!?
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch28: Awe, nice Draco/Harry moment after the Hermione encounter. So sad she doesn't believe in him, but Draco is getting back to trusting Harry more and more.
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I fell to temptation, and began reading another of your stories.... Amazing as always, I cant believe sometimes how well they suck me in, and manage to temporarily destroy my study habits, lol.
Question, does Harry realize that he has met Nemo before this all started, with Hagrid? It seems silly that he wouldnt, but I cant remember them bringing it up. Cant wait for an update :) Is this portion of the trilogy expected to be about as long as the first?
Question, does Harry realize that he has met Nemo before this all started, with Hagrid? It seems silly that he wouldnt, but I cant remember them bringing it up. Cant wait for an update :) Is this portion of the trilogy expected to be about as long as the first?
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if I can somehow rig up a costume to make my mom's papillon look like Politisse. Personally I hate small dogs, so I don't mind torturing it a little.
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #28....
1. About time you brought the little dog back, I thought I had to call
the W-SPCA [W for wizarding] on your ass for neglect! Hmph...
Now, I'm just waiting on Flame...
2. You know it amazes me, how you keep writing stories, haven't you
thought about taking a break and giving yourself time to BREATHE???
If it was ME, I wouldn't stop writing, but I wouldn't post right away.
Just have the story written, take a short vacation, then come back
and post what I've already written.
That's just me though. Of course everyone else would be like 'what the
hell do you mean take a vacation???' But, authors deserve a break...
I just don't want you to burn out, no matter how much steam you got.
Okay, enough being the Mother Hen...
3. I wanted to mention 'Come Slowly Eden'. As you might know, I said
that was a fun story! :-)
That type of competition is RARE in a story that you read, even yours.
I'm glad someone suggested it. Simply, because of the fact, it broke away
from the norm somewhat...Harry trying to get one over Draco in a 'game'
of breaking someone's will....sexually.
For a second, I thought you were going to have Harry flash Draco during
the Quidditch game, with nothing but a...thong or something of that nature.
Anyway, I liked this chapter, with its taste of intrigue. Hopefully, Draco
hasn't bitten off more than he can chew dealing with Lucius.
...and let's see more action!
1. About time you brought the little dog back, I thought I had to call
the W-SPCA [W for wizarding] on your ass for neglect! Hmph...
Now, I'm just waiting on Flame...
2. You know it amazes me, how you keep writing stories, haven't you
thought about taking a break and giving yourself time to BREATHE???
If it was ME, I wouldn't stop writing, but I wouldn't post right away.
Just have the story written, take a short vacation, then come back
and post what I've already written.
That's just me though. Of course everyone else would be like 'what the
hell do you mean take a vacation???' But, authors deserve a break...
I just don't want you to burn out, no matter how much steam you got.
Okay, enough being the Mother Hen...
3. I wanted to mention 'Come Slowly Eden'. As you might know, I said
that was a fun story! :-)
That type of competition is RARE in a story that you read, even yours.
I'm glad someone suggested it. Simply, because of the fact, it broke away
from the norm somewhat...Harry trying to get one over Draco in a 'game'
of breaking someone's will....sexually.
For a second, I thought you were going to have Harry flash Draco during
the Quidditch game, with nothing but a...thong or something of that nature.
Anyway, I liked this chapter, with its taste of intrigue. Hopefully, Draco
hasn't bitten off more than he can chew dealing with Lucius.
...and let's see more action!
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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch27: Poor Draco can't stop worrying about Harry going dark. It's good, story wise, that Draco still doesn't trust Harry completely. I love how Draco slipped into the role of leader for a bit and he probably didn't realize it either.
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel a little bad for Lucius. Draco is going to stand up his own dad. But how will Lucius get Astoria there, he can't tell her he's not in Azkaban and so he can't make sure Draco meets with her.