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for Ceremonies of Strife

by Lomonaaeren

schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So, I got to this story at last.
I loved the first story, this is interesting too.
However, I really dislike Harry
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am getting more into this by chapter 8!
It
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved it and on to the last one!!
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as usual. This story is fabulous and keeps drawing me in with every new chapter. Can't wait to get started on the next one!!! Thanks and great job!!!! =)
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bring on the next part!!!
person NessaC
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a conclusion. I can't wait until the third part starts, and I hope it's soon, because although this is a good place to stop, it also begs the question of how everything is going to play out and, eventually, end.

~Spiritxx
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not sure it could have been one that Draco was looking through. Or Snape's Pensive fluid.

Ch45: Oh boy... I think the "good guys" have done more damage then the "bad guys"... at least the Draco and Harry.

I don't know how Harry is expected to teach his version of Necromancy when he doesn't really know why it works. Isn't he the only on that can talk to snakes??? They best they could do is create a ton of illusions for Harry to transform in to snakes... or offer their blood for the circle.

I can kind of see why Visions came up, but Return??? He doesn't have to bring back Voldamort does he?
person polka dot
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's sad when the good guys aren't very admirable and so you don't really care if they get offed or not, but at least Harry and Draco are still decent folk, though now that the barracks are gone I hope their weird pets survived.
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I sense trouble coming. How can they make a united group and be ready to face Nihil with this much antagonism amongs them? And Holder's behavior is confusing me. Ok, she's a very loyal Auror and quite the sadist as well, but why is she so unnecessarily mean and angry at Harry and Draco? They proved themselves to be honnest and she even forced the truth out of Harry when she was skeptical. They were loyal to the Ministry. Is their witholding of information make her see them as less than loyal to the cause? Or is she one of THOSE person who sees Harry as the embodiment of Good and wouldn't believe he had been currupted so effectively?

I guess we'll know the reason behind her behavior in the sequel. Great ending for this second part, bravo!
person Sp777
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about The End...

Dang! That's another one that ended unexpectedly!

I hope it goes out with a Big Bang...and ties up
in the middle/end in the third installment and
I HOPE Draco gets his pound of flesh from Holder
in the next segment. That WAS cold what she did.

...and there's nothing like Malfoy vengence. :-)