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for The Gold Puppet

by Nerys

person marieve
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tricksy Tricksy...I can't wait to see what Tom's next move will be! I love how you write and this chapter kept me hooked!! Ginny is going to be soo damn frustrated that everyone thinks that she's crazy or imagining things, when she's the only one that actually realises what's happening..Tom however, I think he'll be getting a slight wake up call when it comes to handling Hermione, she's more crafty than he knows. And I cannot wait to see Hermione's reaction when she realises that something in her head is not quite adding up...I'm expecting severe thunderstorms, high winds and a high chance of hail. ;)
person cennaka
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, looks like Hermione got Ginnied. I think she'll be more of a challenge though. Did she get possessed when she destroyed the horcrux or was she just weakened enough to be susceptible later? I'm looking forward to reading more!
person the-quiet-girl
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
superb start, I love the way you both write, so for me this is kind of like a new years present - unexpected and utterly delightful.

I love the title too, not sure why, I just do.

I have a few suspicions as to where this is going to go and cannot wait to see what 'evil-ness' occurs.

*applause and cookies for you both*
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omgggg u have me on the edge of my seat! Please update