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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Oh, so it was the Horocrux part that sent Hermione the nightmare and helped her fight off Tom in the room. And it's through the horcrux that he has control over her. I see. Very interesting. And a very good foundation for the story to stand on.
And Tom's there-is-only-power-thought is actually exactly what I came up with on my bachelor-thesis. One war propaganda's main goals is too make the opponent appear so evil so you can speak of nothing in their favour. Then you won't feel bad for killing the opponents soldiers. Disney, led by US government during WW2, made the nazis appear like the ultimate evil by mixing Christian symbols when they described US vs. germany. So Hitler became the devil and all soldiers looked the same. And this picture of every-nazi-is-evil-and-nothing-but was only increased when they found out what nasty things they had done with the holocaust and everything. And vola! USA have saved us all from the devil. They got the power and no one spoke well of the nazis.
Of course, now there has started forming a lot of groups very much like the nazis, but against muslins instead of jews. The collective memory is short... But oh, well, there is a lot of space for people like Tommy to gain power. And yes, I speak too much of my own reaserch. My teacher may be right when she says I should become a teacher as well. Hm... I think I would scare the kids. Oh, and Serpant-In-Red, who hasn't been stalked by me as Nerys has, FYI, I study History ;) And I include ridiculously long side-notes of my own life when I review. Hope you don't mine too much. I just start thinking when I read and then I have to tell someone and since you two got me thinking in the first place, I'm just throwing it all at you ^^
Oooh... and by the way if you two read my next story which I will start to write when I'm finished with Atlantis, I really hope you won't think I'm plagiarising you with this how Tom can be alive... I too have thought up a clever little think with the chamber of secrets and how all Tom's other parts has come together there again. But in my story it's Salazar who does all the work... er... I'm just getting a little scared when I read this. Because it feels like I've been taking this from your brain, but I really thought it up months ago!
GAH! really guys! How come I've got the same idea as you???? *seriously rethinking her next story*
Haha, Tom is such a bigot. Or should I call him Voldemort? Anyway, this is the most bigoty I've ever read him in a fanfic. It will be interesting to see what happens once he start to know here better. Will he still think she isn't worth the air she is breathing? Hm... Not that I think you'll turn him into a fluffy little bunny who sings ladidadida all day long, but I'm sure they will have sex, but how will he manage that if he thinks she is something a cat coughed up? Ah, well, men are weird when it comes to sex....
Oh, I got the feeling Ginny will realise something is going on with Hermione before she herself does. Yes, of course she will... Haha. And everyone don't want to believe Ginny because admitting it would mean problem. Just how the Ministry reasoned.
Oh, Hermione can be so stupid sometimes. It wouldn't hurt her to be a little more paranoid. Damn naive chit.... playing Tom right into his hands. I'm a little annoyed by her at the moment. Hope it eases up in the next chapter. Toodles.
Oh, so it was the Horocrux part that sent Hermione the nightmare and helped her fight off Tom in the room. And it's through the horcrux that he has control over her. I see. Very interesting. And a very good foundation for the story to stand on.
And Tom's there-is-only-power-thought is actually exactly what I came up with on my bachelor-thesis. One war propaganda's main goals is too make the opponent appear so evil so you can speak of nothing in their favour. Then you won't feel bad for killing the opponents soldiers. Disney, led by US government during WW2, made the nazis appear like the ultimate evil by mixing Christian symbols when they described US vs. germany. So Hitler became the devil and all soldiers looked the same. And this picture of every-nazi-is-evil-and-nothing-but was only increased when they found out what nasty things they had done with the holocaust and everything. And vola! USA have saved us all from the devil. They got the power and no one spoke well of the nazis.
Of course, now there has started forming a lot of groups very much like the nazis, but against muslins instead of jews. The collective memory is short... But oh, well, there is a lot of space for people like Tommy to gain power. And yes, I speak too much of my own reaserch. My teacher may be right when she says I should become a teacher as well. Hm... I think I would scare the kids. Oh, and Serpant-In-Red, who hasn't been stalked by me as Nerys has, FYI, I study History ;) And I include ridiculously long side-notes of my own life when I review. Hope you don't mine too much. I just start thinking when I read and then I have to tell someone and since you two got me thinking in the first place, I'm just throwing it all at you ^^
Oooh... and by the way if you two read my next story which I will start to write when I'm finished with Atlantis, I really hope you won't think I'm plagiarising you with this how Tom can be alive... I too have thought up a clever little think with the chamber of secrets and how all Tom's other parts has come together there again. But in my story it's Salazar who does all the work... er... I'm just getting a little scared when I read this. Because it feels like I've been taking this from your brain, but I really thought it up months ago!
GAH! really guys! How come I've got the same idea as you???? *seriously rethinking her next story*
Haha, Tom is such a bigot. Or should I call him Voldemort? Anyway, this is the most bigoty I've ever read him in a fanfic. It will be interesting to see what happens once he start to know here better. Will he still think she isn't worth the air she is breathing? Hm... Not that I think you'll turn him into a fluffy little bunny who sings ladidadida all day long, but I'm sure they will have sex, but how will he manage that if he thinks she is something a cat coughed up? Ah, well, men are weird when it comes to sex....
Oh, I got the feeling Ginny will realise something is going on with Hermione before she herself does. Yes, of course she will... Haha. And everyone don't want to believe Ginny because admitting it would mean problem. Just how the Ministry reasoned.
Oh, Hermione can be so stupid sometimes. It wouldn't hurt her to be a little more paranoid. Damn naive chit.... playing Tom right into his hands. I'm a little annoyed by her at the moment. Hope it eases up in the next chapter. Toodles.
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 4
Naw, poor Hagrid :( So Voldemort is on a mission to kill everyone who knew him back in the days? Well, that includes Harry so ;) And I just realised that I wrote a mistake in my story. Minerva is indeed only one year older than Tom. Hm...
Nooo, Now Ginny is getting the blame for what Tom did through Hermione. Boo, I really hate that. BOOO! Okay, I may take it a little personal because I know what it's like when everyone just pat your head and says that "It's not real, you are just mad", so I really feel for Ginny. Now I'm kind of hoping she will kill Tom. That's a first. Otherwise I usually just thinks she is annoying... hm... Okay, one with the show. Or maybe not... looks like I have to leave go! Night, night. Maybe. We'll see.
Naw, poor Hagrid :( So Voldemort is on a mission to kill everyone who knew him back in the days? Well, that includes Harry so ;) And I just realised that I wrote a mistake in my story. Minerva is indeed only one year older than Tom. Hm...
Nooo, Now Ginny is getting the blame for what Tom did through Hermione. Boo, I really hate that. BOOO! Okay, I may take it a little personal because I know what it's like when everyone just pat your head and says that "It's not real, you are just mad", so I really feel for Ginny. Now I'm kind of hoping she will kill Tom. That's a first. Otherwise I usually just thinks she is annoying... hm... Okay, one with the show. Or maybe not... looks like I have to leave go! Night, night. Maybe. We'll see.
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
Okay, so I had to read more before I finish my own story. Sue me. I don't think it will be more than 10 pages now... the end is near!!!! And to answer your question in the reviewreply Nerys; I have no idea why my teacher thinks I would be a good teacher. I'm thinking it has something to do with how I don't mind explaining stuff to people and that I can talk for hours. Hehe... I'll probably be one of those stuffy professors who forces the students to stay hours more just discuss a problem and then writes and reads Voldy-porn on my spare time. Yes, that sounds like fun ^^
Okay, now I will actually begin to read chapter five.
Oh, and I have come to turns with my power-to-Ginny-impuls. She is in fact rather stupid to continue to tell everyone what she knows is true without evidence. If she had any brain, she would ask to use a pensive and just place her memory of her conversation with Hermione there and tada!
NOW I will begin.
Haha, what a suitable revenge on Slughorn. Tom is good at plotting people dead. And so are you it would appear ;) I wonder what Hermione would do if she ever found out... Naw, and both Hermione and Harry are sad about Hagrid but not wanting the other to find out. And Ginny is in a locked ward. Will we see more from her in the story? Hm... I wonder what Hermione will do about her when she finally realises that it's indeed Voldemort who is possessing her. Or will she be so far down evil lane she won't care? Hm... intriguing.
OOOH! Horocrux-Hermione is getting control over herself! And liking Voldemort's touch a little? Mehe. OOh, this is intriguing, of course I have to jump to the next chapter immediately :) I can write more later ^^
Okay, so I had to read more before I finish my own story. Sue me. I don't think it will be more than 10 pages now... the end is near!!!! And to answer your question in the reviewreply Nerys; I have no idea why my teacher thinks I would be a good teacher. I'm thinking it has something to do with how I don't mind explaining stuff to people and that I can talk for hours. Hehe... I'll probably be one of those stuffy professors who forces the students to stay hours more just discuss a problem and then writes and reads Voldy-porn on my spare time. Yes, that sounds like fun ^^
Okay, now I will actually begin to read chapter five.
Oh, and I have come to turns with my power-to-Ginny-impuls. She is in fact rather stupid to continue to tell everyone what she knows is true without evidence. If she had any brain, she would ask to use a pensive and just place her memory of her conversation with Hermione there and tada!
NOW I will begin.
Haha, what a suitable revenge on Slughorn. Tom is good at plotting people dead. And so are you it would appear ;) I wonder what Hermione would do if she ever found out... Naw, and both Hermione and Harry are sad about Hagrid but not wanting the other to find out. And Ginny is in a locked ward. Will we see more from her in the story? Hm... I wonder what Hermione will do about her when she finally realises that it's indeed Voldemort who is possessing her. Or will she be so far down evil lane she won't care? Hm... intriguing.
OOOH! Horocrux-Hermione is getting control over herself! And liking Voldemort's touch a little? Mehe. OOh, this is intriguing, of course I have to jump to the next chapter immediately :) I can write more later ^^
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
gorgeous, hilarious & as per your usual style, ladies - utterly divine writing :)
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
Ugh, please get rid of Ron quickly. I don't like him. And you will do as I say. The Dark Lord has already said that he doesn't like carrot head so he's on my side ^^ Get rid of him! Hehe, but I wonder if not Ron has met Tom-as-Hermione, if she don't know what he is ranting about... good Tom ^^ help Hermione get rid of the annoying prick.
AAAH! Hermione, listen to yourself! He is baaad! The healer is baaad!
Damn it, ladies, you are really making me live into the fic.
"Why she suddenly felt the need to hit her head against the wall, she had no idea." Gaaah. yes, Hermione, you could really use a smack at the head. NOW she opens her eyes! Gaah!
Oh, but falling right into Voldemort's arms.... okay, I like that.
"Apparently, he was ... mistaken, much to his disgust." HAHA! I just love that sentence for some reason. At least he is admitting he did a mistake ^^ That is a step forward in the I'm-just-human realisation.
Ooh, the good old "Mudbloods is just for sex" parade. Haven't seen that in a while. Oh, well, that can turn out nicely as well. Am I evil? Yes I am. Oooh, I like the biting part. Hermione is angry and humiliated and what does she do? Bite him, moahaha!
"It excited him." MOAHAHAH! Hadn't counted on that, had you Hermy? Yes, Voldemort is just as twisted as you are :)
So now she as spiked his interest in her. Noot good for her. But very interesting for us readers. Mohahaha. I'm sure she will have to remember that soon enough.
Yes, Ron, you are always the idiot. Why do people even have to say it? Oh, and now they are rowing. Why and I not surprised.
Haha, and it just figures that a busy E.R healer would take time away to heal Saint Potter's little ouch-ouch.
Oh, and Voldemort got such a thing for drama. I wonder what kind of lesson he will teach. I guess I don't have to say that I'll move on to the next chapter? Haha
Ugh, please get rid of Ron quickly. I don't like him. And you will do as I say. The Dark Lord has already said that he doesn't like carrot head so he's on my side ^^ Get rid of him! Hehe, but I wonder if not Ron has met Tom-as-Hermione, if she don't know what he is ranting about... good Tom ^^ help Hermione get rid of the annoying prick.
AAAH! Hermione, listen to yourself! He is baaad! The healer is baaad!
Damn it, ladies, you are really making me live into the fic.
"Why she suddenly felt the need to hit her head against the wall, she had no idea." Gaaah. yes, Hermione, you could really use a smack at the head. NOW she opens her eyes! Gaah!
Oh, but falling right into Voldemort's arms.... okay, I like that.
"Apparently, he was ... mistaken, much to his disgust." HAHA! I just love that sentence for some reason. At least he is admitting he did a mistake ^^ That is a step forward in the I'm-just-human realisation.
Ooh, the good old "Mudbloods is just for sex" parade. Haven't seen that in a while. Oh, well, that can turn out nicely as well. Am I evil? Yes I am. Oooh, I like the biting part. Hermione is angry and humiliated and what does she do? Bite him, moahaha!
"It excited him." MOAHAHAH! Hadn't counted on that, had you Hermy? Yes, Voldemort is just as twisted as you are :)
So now she as spiked his interest in her. Noot good for her. But very interesting for us readers. Mohahaha. I'm sure she will have to remember that soon enough.
Yes, Ron, you are always the idiot. Why do people even have to say it? Oh, and now they are rowing. Why and I not surprised.
Haha, and it just figures that a busy E.R healer would take time away to heal Saint Potter's little ouch-ouch.
Oh, and Voldemort got such a thing for drama. I wonder what kind of lesson he will teach. I guess I don't have to say that I'll move on to the next chapter? Haha
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
Ooh, now I feel bad for Ginny again, being drugged and all :(
""I am not crazy."
"By the time I am done with you, you will be,"" - Now, why don't I doubt that? Tsk... insanity isn't nice in this way. How come only politician can make mad decisions without being called mad? Is it the power-thing again? Yes, it's as they said in Srooge McDuck. Rich people aren't insane, they are original.
Oh, it's going downward for Ginny, that's for sure...
Haha, I know I read a lot Hermione/Lucius, but I sure wouldn't mind some action between the two of them ^^ (What's that my Lord? No, I didn't mean that Lucius was in any way sexier or more charming than you... no, there is no need to... AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!)
Er... okay. So, Lucius the evil Death Eater is getting his punishment, hey?
Oh and how can Hermione and Ron still be together after all those fights? They aren't together, right? Bah...
Haha, I like the way now Voldemort can just sit and do normal stuff like drinking coffee and reading the news papers as he tortures someone. Poor horocrux-Hermione... It just shows how twisted he is. Like in the godfather and the horse head :)
"She'd pay for sending messages to herself and for ... for that." Haha! I knew he was feeling something. Mehe... and he is blaming Hermione. Of course.
Oh, look like Harry just did the Malfoys a bear-favour. Not good... Now Voldemort will do something nasty toward Narcissa.
Yes, that had to cause the end of Hermione and Ron's realsionship... naughty little Voldemort.
Hm... I'm starting to wonder. Where does the Horocrux feel pain? I mean, she don't have a body... oh, well, I'm sure you have some clever explanation for it. And I'm soo tired. will I be able to read the next chapter before I fall asleep? Hmhm... we'll just have to see.
Ooh, now I feel bad for Ginny again, being drugged and all :(
""I am not crazy."
"By the time I am done with you, you will be,"" - Now, why don't I doubt that? Tsk... insanity isn't nice in this way. How come only politician can make mad decisions without being called mad? Is it the power-thing again? Yes, it's as they said in Srooge McDuck. Rich people aren't insane, they are original.
Oh, it's going downward for Ginny, that's for sure...
Haha, I know I read a lot Hermione/Lucius, but I sure wouldn't mind some action between the two of them ^^ (What's that my Lord? No, I didn't mean that Lucius was in any way sexier or more charming than you... no, there is no need to... AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!)
Er... okay. So, Lucius the evil Death Eater is getting his punishment, hey?
Oh and how can Hermione and Ron still be together after all those fights? They aren't together, right? Bah...
Haha, I like the way now Voldemort can just sit and do normal stuff like drinking coffee and reading the news papers as he tortures someone. Poor horocrux-Hermione... It just shows how twisted he is. Like in the godfather and the horse head :)
"She'd pay for sending messages to herself and for ... for that." Haha! I knew he was feeling something. Mehe... and he is blaming Hermione. Of course.
Oh, look like Harry just did the Malfoys a bear-favour. Not good... Now Voldemort will do something nasty toward Narcissa.
Yes, that had to cause the end of Hermione and Ron's realsionship... naughty little Voldemort.
Hm... I'm starting to wonder. Where does the Horocrux feel pain? I mean, she don't have a body... oh, well, I'm sure you have some clever explanation for it. And I'm soo tired. will I be able to read the next chapter before I fall asleep? Hmhm... we'll just have to see.
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
Well, I know that books can make you feel like you have gone to another world but... ;)
Ooh, she has been transformed into some... dominatix? Or... well... something naughty.
Honey? HAHAHAHA! Ooh, Voldemort is really messing with her mind... It's that altering reality-potion, right? Not that I mind. Oh, not at all. Mehe.
Of course it feels right, Hermy. You and Voldemort should be in bed together all the time! I like the way how Hermione knows that she wants to be on top but still enjoys what he does, but yet feel shy. It's quite realistic.
""And I know a lot of very ... creative methods to make you feel as I desire you to feel."" - Well, as Elvis ones sang; A little less conversation, a little more action, please.
Okay, how can she remain pure and innocent if you believe that sex makes you unpure? Naaa, I don't buy it... has to be something else.
The sex scene is hot in a dark twisted way in the fic. But it's one of those things that aren't hot in real life. So, thank the gods for fanfiction, right? ;)
Haha and Hermione misses him afterward. Poor girl.
He is torturing her with a dishwasher? HAHA! That is just hilarious! Okay, so I saw this one episode of Misomer Murder where a lady got killed by being pushed into a clothswashingmachine but still... hehe, it's just funny.
Oh, boy, now Ron has seem them kiss... will he be clever enough to create a pensive or something to prove it to Harry? Why do I doubt that...
Yes, why would Voldemort care who she fancied anyway? Mehe... and suddenly he sees more potential. Men... always thinking with their cock. And does he really want Hermione to be like everyone else? No, I don't think so ;)
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHAHAHAA! He came in his pants when Hermione took control? OOOH, I LOVE THAT! That is bloody fantastic! He sooo got a cruch on her. Yes, he does. In his own special way of course. OOOH AND HE FEELS HER HAIR FROM THE POTION AS WELL AS THE SAME THING SHE LIKE! I LOVE IT! Haha, I love it when he is shaken. He always do so stupid things then. Ooh, and Hermione is smelling something new too. How interesting :D
And now her horcrux-self has finally come up with a better idea. Excellent. A snake-approach. Mehe, It will be very interesting to see what will happen. This is the best chapter yet! Love it!
And now I really need sleep, my head is getting dizzy... Excellent story so far, girls! Take care!
Well, I know that books can make you feel like you have gone to another world but... ;)
Ooh, she has been transformed into some... dominatix? Or... well... something naughty.
Honey? HAHAHAHA! Ooh, Voldemort is really messing with her mind... It's that altering reality-potion, right? Not that I mind. Oh, not at all. Mehe.
Of course it feels right, Hermy. You and Voldemort should be in bed together all the time! I like the way how Hermione knows that she wants to be on top but still enjoys what he does, but yet feel shy. It's quite realistic.
""And I know a lot of very ... creative methods to make you feel as I desire you to feel."" - Well, as Elvis ones sang; A little less conversation, a little more action, please.
Okay, how can she remain pure and innocent if you believe that sex makes you unpure? Naaa, I don't buy it... has to be something else.
The sex scene is hot in a dark twisted way in the fic. But it's one of those things that aren't hot in real life. So, thank the gods for fanfiction, right? ;)
Haha and Hermione misses him afterward. Poor girl.
He is torturing her with a dishwasher? HAHA! That is just hilarious! Okay, so I saw this one episode of Misomer Murder where a lady got killed by being pushed into a clothswashingmachine but still... hehe, it's just funny.
Oh, boy, now Ron has seem them kiss... will he be clever enough to create a pensive or something to prove it to Harry? Why do I doubt that...
Yes, why would Voldemort care who she fancied anyway? Mehe... and suddenly he sees more potential. Men... always thinking with their cock. And does he really want Hermione to be like everyone else? No, I don't think so ;)
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHAHAHAA! He came in his pants when Hermione took control? OOOH, I LOVE THAT! That is bloody fantastic! He sooo got a cruch on her. Yes, he does. In his own special way of course. OOOH AND HE FEELS HER HAIR FROM THE POTION AS WELL AS THE SAME THING SHE LIKE! I LOVE IT! Haha, I love it when he is shaken. He always do so stupid things then. Ooh, and Hermione is smelling something new too. How interesting :D
And now her horcrux-self has finally come up with a better idea. Excellent. A snake-approach. Mehe, It will be very interesting to see what will happen. This is the best chapter yet! Love it!
And now I really need sleep, my head is getting dizzy... Excellent story so far, girls! Take care!
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Where do I begin? Oh yes -- with the Weasleys. Ginny being tormented (and drugged) into insanity? Ron getting flayed by the truth -- that he's a no-account, jealous, disloyal, stupid git? It's official: I love your Tom. The redheads deserve that and so much more, and I get the feeling Voldy's going to give it to them. Poor Harry...not!
I'm not crazy about the cup torture (which is a really, really weird phrase when you think about it), but it's a fascinating twist on horcrux lore. And I very much appreciate how you're introducing the idea of Voldy "caring" about Hermione, while still keeping him so deliciously, scarily evil. Great update.
I'm not crazy about the cup torture (which is a really, really weird phrase when you think about it), but it's a fascinating twist on horcrux lore. And I very much appreciate how you're introducing the idea of Voldy "caring" about Hermione, while still keeping him so deliciously, scarily evil. Great update.
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story a bit too much, I think. I mean, clearly I should be rooting for Hermione to break the hold Tom has on her, right? And I should want someone to really listen to Ginny, who knows a bit of the truth, right? But I loathe the Weasleys, especially Ginny, so I find myself hoping fervently that Hermione crucios her little red head off (because of Tom, of course...) and maybe lays a bit of hurt on Ron, too. Can't wait to see what Tom/Hermione has in store for Harry, now that I think of it. More, please!
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am just not that into this story. For some reason it is just not catching my fancy. I think it might be because I am not into the whole "sharing a body" thing. I really like The Apprentice a lot! So I will definitely keep reading that one!