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for The Gold Puppet

by Nerys

person hero_jaejoong
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another fabulous chapter ladies.... i must say that i actually kind of like your rendition of ginny weasly, more than (looking sideways for sign of die-hard rowlings fanS) Miss rowling's...this was a first, since i never like ginny weasly, ever! but your ginny was consistent with her character from the beginning and very believeable unlike some of the fanfictions portrayal of her, which would be either as a promiscuous back stabbing b****h or promiscuous friend, and she made me want someone to get her as far away from tom's very evil but nonetheless very attractive hands.

one more thing... why isnt tom trying to find another way to be immortal again? or is he already immortal from making hermione a horcrux?

ps:i have a tiny itty bitty winsie favour to ask.... i promised to send lots and lots of fanfictions cookies if you guys accept.. pretty please...with strawberry on haagen daz cream and cookies on top..
person hero_jaejoong
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh i absolutely love this chapter...i just love the way hermione gained the upper hand;p
but i hope not for long... cuz if there is one thing i absolutely love about tom is having him on top...relationship-wise and most definitely physically...heheheheh....you guys know what i'm talking about...and dont pretend that you dont love it too....
person risotto
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, here I come, and I see another fic! Weeeeeeeeee!
Looking forward to the next update ( and Riddle's downfall haha)
person ExSquared
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YuM Yum yum YUM yum yum yUm!!

That was the bestest chapter I have AYVER read!!

There is something so incredibly appealing about Voldemort relinquishing just a tiny bit of control, and the "please", and the bound wrists and the "bad boy" comments.... om nom nom. You two are genius, I cannot deny it any longer. I ahve read this fic from the posting of the first chapter, but I never got around to reviewing... but I could abstain any longer in the face of such a debauched dark lord.

Too right Hermione get's all the fun!

Brillian, brilliant fic. Can't wait for an update :) This is such an intriguing twist to the LVHG genre.

-Ex
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are most welcome, ladies :D
I really liked this chapter. I liked how Hermione took control over him and how he liked it. Mehe. Those thoughts Hermione has really shows that she is planning something and you get really excited to find out what it is, so when she takes his wand and bind him to the floor you are like HOLY CRAP! WAY TO GO HERMIONE!
I'm also kind of wondering whether he will join her to Australia or not... hm...
""Thank Merlin he chose the wrong curse though," she commented, rolling her eyes. "You would think that after firing the Killing Curse at Harry for three times and it backfiring on him for three times, the git would've learnt to use something different. It's pretty obvious to anyone with half of a brain that it's not going to work. I mean, come on." She giggled. "Well, maybe he did get his brains fried in the cauldron during his resurrection, or,"
person Elspethe
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Greatest. Chapter. EVER.
person mimi
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this seriously has to be the most epic chapter-ever! i was just thinking about how cool it would be to finally have a *scene* with hermione in power- ATLAST. there is just something so sexy about tom riddle begging- i mean he's usually so restrained and incontrol- seriously, i wonder how he's gona take this.... hehe, i bet torture will be involved. anyway, awesome twist :)
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, so that's what Tom tells himself he really wants Hermione for... because she will be someone with power. Yeah.. I almost buy it ;)
Haha, and now Hermione is laughing at him. Oh, he is so pissed. But I have to agree with Hermione... he was awfully much like her safe. And all she really has to do is to snoop around and find out whom that table belongs to. She is snoopy enough. But now I believe she is giving herself too much credit... Hermione hasn't suspected anything yet. Even if I hope that will change... Hm... she just doesn't seem to be using her brain so much. Ohh, I really hope cup-Hermione is right and Hermione starts seeing the connection...
And yes, now Tom realises how stupid he is. MOHAHAH! (No, my Lord, I didn't mean you were stupid... I just... AAAAAARH!)
Some time later...
Okay... hm... I thought about a thing... why do they say "My Lord" to some of the females in Stargate? Oh, well..
Back to the story, yeah, of course Tom can't stand to look ugly and dumb...
Oooh, so now Tommy got a plan to keep Hermione from telling anyone.... good work, Cup-Hermione... couldn't just shut up and let the other you figure it out and expose Tom... although... if that had happened, there wouldn't be any more smut between the two of them... hm... How mean for Tom to keep her (and us) in the dark... But I'm guessing on some sort of kidnapping? :P
However, I think Cup-Hermione is right, his arrogance will be his downfall ^^ I wonder what she is planning, hihi.
Baah, Ron is such a coward... But I think they are both taking each other for granted... they really are an ill fit. Ugh, why do Mrs Weasley want Hermione for Ron so badly? They have nothing in common! Bah, I really hope she won't be interfering too much.. but of course she will... she we'll try to snare Hermione for Ron..
Oh and now Hermione is leaving good! And Ron stands outside the door listing... that really shows how far apart they have got from each other... sad in a way...
"No, he couldn't take her back again, and especially after how kind she was to Lavender" Good! Stay away from her!
"The Mudblood had been kind enough to surrender herself to Lord Voldemort by arriving at his doorstep. How considerate of her." HAHAH! Yes, really, how considerate :D Ooh, this is looking so good I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :) YAY! Excellent work!
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM



He felt a sharp pain on his head and realised he'd pulled on his roots a bit too harshly. Letting go of his hair before it would really be in his hand instead of on his head, he glared at the cup, which just peeked over the rim of his pocket. Its rubies twinkled in the light, taunting him. Blasted woman.

Perhaps my other self had known her and that
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It would appear I did not have to wait long at all. Nice :D I guess I have to give the kudos to Serpent in Red, because, Nerys, you write fantastic stories, but you are usually not that fast to update when you are alone ;) Or maybe you are just really quick together? In any case, I'm happy!
Oh, warnings in the beginning! That is always a good sign!
I love it when someone attractive have the hand at the small of my back. It's just so promising somehow! And now as well :D And I would imagine Tom to be an expert in dancing... hopefully the bedroom dance as well.
Isn't it a bit risky on Tom's part to sit down by the table everyone knows belongs to Lord Voldemort? And to do it with such confidence? Or has he already starting to take control over his followers? No, somehow I doubt that..
HAHA! Seth? Yes, that is a perfect cover name for Tom. I've used it in some stories as well. What a coincidence ^^
"I've been too busy sticking my nose into books." - If a handsome man told me that, I'd jump in bed with him. OH, wait. Already have. So now Hermione should do it too.
"a mocking smile, that went unnoticed by Hermione but not by their elderly waiter, appeared on his face