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yay! hahah yes that was really fast:) thanks!!! i seriously check all the time to see if you updated lol. i love this story!

DAMN, FUCKING BlOODY HELL! THIS FUCKING COMPUTER IS MAKING ME WANT TO KILL IT!
I had almost finished the review, when it did something and decided that now was a good time to shut down. BAH!
Okay, I started with how Brilliant plan Hermione has come up with, even if it's sad that it's on the expense of Harry's and Ginny's relationship. Although, I'm sure Harry would do the same... he is after all, always the hero. So yay! Cup!Hermione managed to save Ginny's sanity anyway. I'm happy.
Then we get to see Hermione standing in front of her parent's new house. This actually brought tears to my eyes :( Poor Hermione. But I can see how she is doubtful, I mean, she has spent almost half her life away from them. I don't see how parents would want to send their children away (well, unless they were troublesome) at the age of 11! And how come JK never mentions any home-sickness? I mean, sure, Harry has nothing to miss, but I'm sure Hermione and Ron loves their parents, so how come they never mention it? Weird.
Oh, well, good thing Tom showed up. However, doesn't seem like Hermione is suspicious. I know I would have been. Oh, well, we have already stated that her brain stops working every time Tom is around, haha.
That part with them kissing on the couch made me almost pee my pants with laughter. It's ALWAYS funny when someone else gets in those type of embarrassing situation.
Ohh, and some Ron-bashing! That's always fun. But yes, he is a bloody coward most of the time... and selfish...
"Seth, on the other hand, had always been understanding, intelligent, kind, supportive, charming, handsome." - Well, intelligent, charming and handsome anyway...
Oooh, yes, punish the naughty boy for not sending an owl! SPANKING! SPANKING! SPANKING!
NO! BAD, BAD AUTHORS! You can't stop right there! I have our Lord on my side and he is demanding you to update RIGHT NOW! GIVE US SMUT! BAH!
Okay, something is really wrong with my computer... I can't seem to copy anything. :S Let's hope you can get this review then...
Great chapter!

please update soon!

I decided to read chapter 8, sice it's different here. This Sunday just felt too peaceful to me. It doesn't anymore. I think I should feel more than a little bit disturbed. I don't. And if I had gotten a drink before reading that chapter, I wouldn't even feel that little bit. What have you done to me? xD
Hermione's new outfit was something I can't really comment on. I'm still imagining it. But the description sounded as if you put much thought into it. I can't comprehend how perfectly understandable every thing Voldemort did seemed to me. He's...philosophy on Muggleborns was just...perfectly understandable. No, it was not. I'm doing it again!
I'm not surprised Hermione needed to take control after that kind of experience. And it wasn't even fully real...What a fantasy you write...
Nice...
That's how I wouldn't describe it.

*To sum up this chapter: 'It seemed the world was divided into good and bad people. The good ones slept better... while the bad ones seemed to enjoy the waking hours much more. '
I love Woody Allen if only for the fact I can quote him.

I liked this story for its writing style so I read your other one, The Apprentice. I personally enjoyed the story line of The Apprentice more. The Gold Puppet just feels like it is going on and on and not really going anywhere exciting. I am really excited about what might happen in The Apprentice though. But you probably have plans for The Gold Puppet that will be surprising so I will definitely keep reading it. Just don't drop The Apprentice because it is a good story as well.

hi again...another fabulous chapter. how pissed do you think tommy gonna be when he realized he's been skillfully manipulated by cup!hermione into releasing Ginny? anyone for very very pissed?(raised hand and jumped up and down ecstatically).

i still dont understand why tom isnt searching a new way to gain immortality. (rereading 2nd chpter) i get that he turn hermione into horocrux and making hermione somewhat immortal, pushing his own horocrux out, so he can be whole being plus the other fragmented soul that fought with harry before joining him. but i thought harry and the gang already destroyed the rest of his horocrux, so he couldnt be immortal due to his horocrux. that's why in the first book he wanted to get the philosophe's stone, since philosopher's stone extend your life span but horocrux do not, you can still die but the other horocrux you made will release the soul inside so you can be alive again. maybe i'm just thinking about this too much...

ps: about the favour...its nothing big- atleast i dont think it is... if you guys could put it somewhere in next chapters (with "s", i'm not choosy which chapter you decide to put this in) the curse words "oh, fuck-on-stick!!" and "fuckity fuck fuck".... i'm trying to spread the love...

Ahh cliffie! I can't wait to see what is coming next and I am loving that Hermione took control. It's so nice to see a Hermione that uses her brain and her wand. And who wouldn't want to make out with Tom in a pub? He he he I loved how Ron the schmuck saw everything!

But if you choke me, I'm going to haunt you for all eternity."

"I'll get a Ghost Restraining Order."

"I'll ignore it," Hermione deadpanned, while her hands massaged his balls.

"They can en-enfoooorce," he moaned, "it."



lol


i loved this chapter guys. It was so hot and unexpected. I didn't expect her to just go there, suck him and leave LOL

loved that chapter

cant wait for more

Oooh, so they are off in Australia. Nice. Or just Hermione? :( Booo.
Hehe and I don't think it was so bad for Hermione to go down on Tom... at least that is what we reader thinks ^^ And I think I have figured it out now... Hermione doesn't uses her brain because she is too hot for Tom ^^ You don't really think when you just want to shag someone senseless. At least not with the logical side of the brain, mehe.
I like cup-Hermione's reasoning about why she acted like she acted, that explains even more her actions against Tom. I also like how she is ranting about how horrible Ron is. HE REALLY IS! I don't understand why Rowling let him have Hermione when he has been so mean to her in the past. You don't fall in love with someone when you are like thirteen and then marry. Well, not often anyway. And not when he has been so mean! He is a dolt. He should be together with another dolt and have a lot of stupid kids.
"However, Riddle was not a valid substitute" - oh, he is more than a substitute. Hermione had never had anything she needed a substitute for. And Ron wasn't unfeeling like Tom. He just cared more about all his feelings and jealousy than he cared about Hermione, even if he told himself he cared and that everything was her fault. Tom will try very hard to be unfeeling and then prove by his actions that he feels something for her. MOHAHAHA!
Haha, and Tom wouldn't look beautiful to her if she didn't find things inside him beautiful, like his love (or what you should call it) for knowledge. Okay, sure, some people look great on pictures, but ones they begin to talk, you just find them so ugly because they show they are so... mean and annoying.
So see, she looooves him.
"It was so nice to finally be able to talk to someone about magical theories, who actually had a rebuttal and didn't look at her with dropped jaws and their eyes set in a glassy, bored manner." - Heavens yes... I actually didn't think people like that existed before I came university. Well, when it comes to history obviously. And the sex after having a academical debate... yummy. Hermione and Tom will have soooo much sex. They have to. MAKE THEM HAVE SEX!
Yees, work on a way to heal Ginny ^^
"Slowly, she looked up, in a way people did in horror movies when the monster stood right in front of them and they hadn't noticed it before" - eh... have Ginny actually seen a horror movie? Or was that just a reference to us readers? Hm... it felt a bit misplaced somehow. I mean, I know that you are referring to Tom-as-Lewis, but still..
Oooh, nice healer is helping Ginny not to take the drugs. Nice. And finally Ginny is acting reasonable. Don't let Tom pull you down again!
Although, nice to hear Hermione means more to him than Ginny. Of course, that is quite obvious, but still :)
Haha, so funny that Voldemort never considered the Weasleys a "real" threat. Not sure if I agree. They are many and some of them seem to be quite powerful, like Ginny, the twins and Bill (maybe Charlie too, with the dragons... not Ron and Percy, though, nor the parents). Although, they seem a bit reluctant to do any real damage so I guess that's why... they actually care about other people, I mean :)
BOOO! Evil Tom doing that to Ginny. That so remindes me of what Wolfram&Hart did to Cordelia in the first sesaon of Angel, making her see all the sorrow in the world. Scary stuff :(
Oooh, but cup-Hermione have found a way to save her? YAY! Can't wait to hear what she has planned. Got to be something nice. Hopefully, it will work again. I still feel for Ginny. More now when she is thinking again... or, well, she was thinking before Tom gave her that potion. Hm... Yeah, I hope she will be fine!
Excellent chapter! Now I will go to bed. Tomorrow is another day of skiing! Today the cold effect was -42C. Isn't that just jolly? I actually have a frostbite (or what you call it) on my cheek. Looks like I've been in a fight... oh, well. G'night!