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Lol i really look forward to seeing hermione speaking with her cool cup.

Another excellent chapter! :) I read the entire story to date in one sitting. So addicting. Seriously.

"Why, thank you, Granger," he finally said oh so softly, barely breaking that delicious silence. He drew his fingers over the cup, caressing it gently. "You have been most helpful and ... Lord Voldemort always rewards those who serve him well."

He took the cup in his hand and lifted it to his lips, giving it a teasing kiss and laughing when he felt it shudder.

"You really are a good little servant, honey. Lord Voldemort will remember this when he lays judgement on you in the end."

good part


Perhaps he should Crucio the entire Granger line into insanity before they drove him there?
LOL


A soft cough made her freeze.

Oh no! No, no, no, no, no. This wasn't happening. My mother didn't just walk in on me making out with a bloke on her couch. Thank Merlin, my father isn't in.

Her face flushed in embarrassment, she tried to wiggle off Tom's lap, but he held onto her with a devious grin. "You really don't want to turn around now," he whispered to her lips.

"Hello, Monica," her father's voice sounded behind her, "and who have we here?"

Hermione groaned and stared at Tom in horror. "You can always Obliviate this from their memory," he suggested mischievously. "Though, I recommend doing it after you fed them the potion."

All she did was close her eyes and bang her head against his shoulder. Life was so unfair



LMAFO great scene. amusing as hell lol

As if to vent her anger, she grabbed him by his shirt and pulled on it, successfully ripping it apart. With satisfaction, she listened to the sounds of the buttons flying off in different directions and hitting different things in the room.

His eyes slightly darkened at her actions, and she quirked an eyebrow at him, as if she was daring him. In a sensual, lithe move, he lifted his lower body and rested it on the side against the line of hers. His left leg entangled with hers, while her left arm was caught underneath his armpit

That totally sucks to have those memories with Voldemort gone. Sigh... I loved that scene and that Voldemort almost lost control. Ha! And he was claimed by Hermione! Harry made a very poor decision to look in the Pensieve.

Yeeees! I've been waiting and waiting for a new chapter! WIIIH!
YEES! They are in bed! FINALLY!
"You stole my wand," she accused - Well, she did stole his first ;)
"For some reason, his actions excited her," -What do you mean "for some reason"? The guy is hot and passionate and are clearly about to fuck you! What is there not to be excited about???
I looove the power-strugle between them, both wanting to be on top. Wonder what Hermione will think about the evil glint in Tom's eyes when they aren't in the heat of passion anymore. Or if she even will remember it...
""I'm yours," she conceded with a nod before she tilted her head slightly to one side and lowered her tone to a hiss, "but you ... belong to me."" - Noooow we're getting somewhere! They do belong together!
""My Lord!"" - What. The. Fuck? Oooh, is she remembering the dream-altered-reality-thingy?
OOOOH!OOOOH!OOOH! SHE KNOWS! SHE FIGURED IT OUT!
"The fact that she was naked and still in his arms, while his cock softened inside of her, made a furious blush appear on her cheeks." - I actually don't blame her... er... that has to be veeeeery embarrassing. Me like :D
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! He did that curse again :( Darn him! It's much more fun when Hermione knows... But hooot smut scene. I really like how you mix their feelings and thought together with their actions, so it isn't just "he touched her here, she climaxed there". That gets boring after a while...
"he wasn't going to just take Granger's word on what was the right approach for him to take with the silly, redheaded, uptight maiden." - Ug... I knew it was too good to be true. I just hope Harry will react like Tom wants him to react, so he will let Ginny go. Ooh, but I'm wondering what is it he will show Harry... iiich! Another cliffy! You mean, mean girls! Although, I assume it's something completely garishly in those memories. Poor Harry. And then Ginny will have to live with the belief that they have actually happened! Iiish! That isn't very good either. I wonder what Hermione will say... oh, well. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! I want to know what happens! Gimme!
Otherwise, excellent chapter. Of course. I'm a sucker for smut, as you know ;) Keep on writing!

is it just me..or is the room getting more than just a tad hotter? (sighing) finally, tom on top. just where i needed him to be....
again another amazing chapter.. i almost didn't miss reading new chapters of 'apprentice' (nerys-hint.hint.hint)

Bad bad riddle...so hes planning to bring down the whole weasley family eh.

Weeee hot stuff! Me like! Me want more!

*Miya has split herself into two and are sneaking around the authors houses. She sneaks up to the windows and sees the authors doing something besides writing! Furiously does her two parts take stolen wands and aim it at the authors* Imperio! Write on the Gold Puppet! Go through if you have already written chapter 15 and edit it so you can post it! Then, post chapter 15! GIVE ME AN UPDATE!