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What an intriguing chapter. LV shall prevail and rule the world ;)

Thanks for the update.

Love Sonia :)

Yay another chapter! :D I love how utterly dark Tom/Voldemort is. Serves Hermione right...if we can't have him, we can make him beat her. *snicker*

Oh yes Tom, show Hermione how it is done.

Excellent chapter. Kudo's to Hermione for at least attempting to dominate Tom, but we all know who is the dominant one in this relationship ;)

Thank you, my lovely ladies, for putting this chapter up.

Love Sonia :)

Hm... my memory are not that good when it comes to fanfictions, it would seem. I'll just have to wait until more chapters are out and reread the whole thing :) Since I know how busy you are, I'll probably manage to forget this before the next one is out and all anyway. So take your time :) I'll read again when this story is complete!

ladies i have no words to the describe the brilliance of your fict. after months of banning myself from the internet and to return and find such treasures of chapters you have written. i'm forever humbled in the presence of masters. bravo! bravo!

p/s: i hope my shameless obsequiousness will induced the masters of tomione kingdom to write the masterpiece that is the golden puppet. if that doesnt work, i'm not above begging!!

A fluffy, sappy Tom scares the hell out of me :) Thank you guys for updating....this chapter was fantastic and I cannot wait to read the next, what a cliffy! Hope the wrist gets better soon, by the way!

Ooh good an update :)

I had thought this story abandoned. I'm so glad you continued it!! Thoroughly enjoying it! More please!!! The characters are nicely developed, Tom is neither too fluffy or too two dimensional. Hermione is not insipid (as many people seem to find it easier to write her in connection with LV.) \
One point I will make though - I'm confused in all resurrection fics why Lord Voldemort never simply uses a muggle method to kill harry, since magic has failed several times. It would only take a quick slice with a knife and, although curses are the standard form, I find it hard to believe death eaters were entirely unfamiliar with knives or other implements of torture. Then theres poison. he could poison him. Yet... he never does. He always seems to want to 'break him' by fiddling about with his loved ones. That seems rather james-bond-villan, somehow. And in *this* fic he even concretely realises that his more serpentine form was behaving stupidly.
I suppose its just coyote syndrome. You know.. from the roadrunner cartoons. You start wishing the coyote would one day get to have a satisfying roast roadrunner dinner. In that way I guess i long for the day Lord Voldemort gets his satisfying ending.
Course if harry were dispatched so easily, it would remove a significant driver of the plot. What else is he motivated by, other than developing and dominating Hermione? Is he mortal now? He has no other horcruxes around anymore. Surely that must be bothering him by now.. When Hermione incapacitated him in his flat he had been concerned about aurors. Wouldnt the idea that a stray hex would kill him start to prey on his mind by now? (shrug) Either way - this fic is absolutely delicious and I cant wait for the next update!!!

Finally! Very, very hot. I do prefer a dominant Tom, and I loved this chapter because he does win at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter!

God its frustrating how brilliant you are when considered in conjunction with your apparent fickle inability to stay on task. you have so many highly enjoyable fics that you just tossed out into the snow and never continued. This one i was particularly sad over when i realised it would *never* have a resolution.