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GREAT. Now I have to go take a cold shower. Thanks a lot. :D
Leave it to old Lucius to romance poor Ginny. I think she deservs it. Good show!

I like the LM/GW pairing! Is he going to be able to help her through her ritual? How is Draco going to handle this quasi-relationship? That's going to make for an interesting ritual -LM/DM/SS! I'm having a bit of trouble getting into Serena. I catch myself just skimming over the parts with her in them. For me, she needs to move along (be developed) at a faster clip. With that written... Well done!

LOVED it!! *does happy dance for Ginny's sex life* lol.

mmm i'm so full from the cake and ice cream. i especialy loved the white cream. lol. ginny should go to draco for a 'helping' hand with her problem. :)

Well done! Again! You did a really good job of catching and revealing the emotions of your playthings in this chapter! It was really believable and fitting for each. I didn't pick up many "writer at her desk" tones, which would have been easy with the amount of narration needed in this chapter.

I am glad that Bill is present to help support Ginny especially when it is pointed out there is a rift between her and her former friends. I couldn't help but notice how well Snape commented to himself that she was responding so well to the training. She must be a wreck considering she is pregnant and facing a gang bang with the very real possibility of harm from some screwed up wizards. I can only hope that the Dark Lord will see the value of keeping her safe in light of the magic that the babies produce. I must also say that Snape is a sadistic jerk for denying a pregnant woman release from her raging sex drive. One day her mood swings may get the best of her and she will hex his ass. Mu ha ha ha

yeah that hurt. I think I am having some cookies and cream ice cream now. Either way, I still look forward to how the story plays out. Poor Snape.

Snape has a dark, mean, evil side. Ginny (as per cannon) was border line Slytherin - remember all the things the twins said about her hexs. None of them wanted to be on the business end of her wand but had been on several occasions... and she was the youngest! I kinda' feel like your writing her off too weakly. She was a lioness, not a complainer. She would have sucked it up, gritted her teeth and got on with it. In the books, her love for Harry brought out the steel in her core. I think it would in this case with Snape, too.

I think that, even in cannon, Snape liked Ginny. She's the only main Gryffindor that Snape never derided. I don't think that your Snape and Ginny, or the situation are really off cannon. She might mope about the situation for a little while, but once she made up her mind, nothing would be able to stop her. She had 6 brothers and Harry was like a brother. That awareness of the male nature combined with her own dark nature... she would have some idea of a Death Eater initiation and her Gryffindor side would propel her into the realm "where angels fear to tread".

You're doing good! Keep it up! Oh, BTW - I'll have plain, warm spice cake with homemade peach ice cream, please!

*squeal*
Naked Draco!!! YUM.
Snape is a big a-hole, but I understand him. Poor everyone in this story.

mmmmmm i'm ready for my cake! first molly is annoying in the books as well, i never really liked her character at all. second yea for hermione later on. third poor severus. and forth i really wanted draco and ginny to have sex and i want her to have sex with lucius as well. hmmmmm now my mind is thinking very dirty things with all three of them...at the same time.....and alone with each...... ;)