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Woo-Hoo! Go Remmy! Great chapter, Poor Ginny

yeah remus is going to get himself a hottie!!

Well I was hopeing to see more Ginny /Snape in this chapter but thats life. I have to admit I do check everday to see if maybe you updated sooner!

There was so much that I loved about this story, right from the very beginning. I'm not a big Snape/Ginny fan (I think Hermione will always be my favorite for him), but the summary sounded interesting, so I decided to give it a go. I'm so glad that I did. I'm not going to lie and say that this story was flawless and perfect, but I will say that the good definitely outweighed the bad! The smut has been fabulous - seriously, very hot! Makes me wish my husband wasn't halfway around the world right now! Also, because I've read all 16 chapters in one go, it was really obvious to see how you've grown as a writer since the first chapter. I had so many nitpicks in the first chapter, but in almost every chapter since, I've seen an improvement. I had a few I meant to mention, but because I didn't make a note of them, I can't remember all of them. I do remember this one though: It's Remus, not Remes. I was also a little confused about why you changed Luna's history, because her mom died when she was 8 or 9, and that's why she was able to see the thestrals in OotP. Not a big deal, really, I was just wondering if there was a greater reasoning behind it.

I like that you've kept Sirius alive and have him and Hermione in a relationship. Dumbledore having a love child is very squick to me, but so long as you don't have him starring in a smut scene, I think we're okay lol... Lucius is a great lover for Ginny, but I won't deny that I'd really hoped her and Draco would have a thing. Only, I think Draco would probably be more competition for Severus than Lucius is. Oh, in an earlier chapter you asked if readers thought you'd glorified the initiation rape, and I thought I would share my thoughts on it: You did not. For one, it wasn't entirely rape, because Ginny went there of her own free will and allowed it to happen to her knowing full well what was going to happen. Was it wrong? Was it horrible? Yes. But was it true rape? No, it was definitely a gray area. (Please don't misinterpret me, I'm definitely not saying it was consensual!)

Anyway, one of my trademarks is giving really long reviews - I hope you don't mind! I'm really looking forward to more of this story! Oh, and I would be delighted to be a beta for you, if you'd like. I don't usually read here because I prefer moderated sites, but I really don't want to lose track of this story. So, please, give me an email sometime, it's delayedpoet at gmail dot com :)

great plot! i never this type of story of ginny & severus before.

Why does Snape just let her go to the Malfoy house? Stupid Snape! Stupid Snape! Go after her!!! Any way i love the story and I think that it is really good. I definantly think that you did the rape justice in this chapter. Also I really like how she flashed back to Snape and her getting in on and Lucius and her getting it on. Love it keep writting. Also one last thing I love the Sirius and Hermione relationship. More of that would be amazing also. Thanks!!!

Well I knew the scene was coming up so I had braced myself for it. No, I don't feel you glorified it. Sometimes I carry a scene in my head and it is a relief to get it out, especially if it is a graphic scene with rape, torture, murder, etc. I imagine you feel the same? I hope Snape doesn't act like an asshole. We all know Ginny needs him, this time most of all. Maybe he can step up to the job....

Wow, I'm now sick to my stomach, yet surprisingly proud of Ginny. I like that you made her that strong.

As much as I love the idea of Ginny and Snape, I love Ginny and Lucius more.

I think you did a good job writing. It's a hard subject to write about, I do love that Lucius demanded to take her with him. :)