rate_review Reviews

I greatly enjoyed the story and look forward to reading your other tales.
My only criticism would be proofreading for grammar and sometimes missed words. I know when you're typing fast because ideas are flowing it is very easy to do. However it can be distracting and can lead to misconstrued meaning by your readers. I have read one or two of your oneshots and noticed they did not seem to have as many of those errors.
Please don't take it as a criticism of content, I loved your alternate storyline! And I loved a redemption of Tom Riddle. I am one of those people always looking for the good in others, so the idea of redeeming him is one that really appealed to me. I love the strength you gave Ginny and a loving and redeemed Severus and Lucius, and even Draco.
Very well done!!

There are certain - ahem - chapters that I find myself going back and reading here and there. Great story.

Great story :)

I love the first scene between Snape and Ginny, and the closet scene, but the pregnancy part isn't my favorite. It worked well for the storyline but still, ugh. I'd love to see more shorts and one-shots from you. You're really good at writing the erotic scenes and conveying the emotion creatively. Good job!

All in all this was a well written story. There were times where it felt rather cheesy, and I'm not a fan of pregnancy in a story, but it wored well for the storyline. I'd highly reccommend avoiding being too cheesy when dealing with Snape next time ;)

Fantastic ending, although I was sad to see it go! I kind of wanted it to go on forever, although that might have been unfair to you in the long run. Still, I will miss the updates and look forward to your next story. You have created a dedicated follower with this story!

I've been reading your story over the past week, and I can say I have been enjoying it to an extent. I have had some serious problems with some parts, and I saw you said you changed soem things, not sure what but I hope it was worthwhile. I usually can't stand pregnant sex, it creeps me out, but at least during the sex scenes you don't talk about it. I'll be glad to have one where Ginny isn't pregnant though! Looking forward to seeing how you end this, and hope you'll do another story soon :)

Okay I am satisfied with the justice doled out by Severus and Lucius. I will be sad to see the story come to an end. Sigh
in the meantime good luck on your finals

Good chapter. I can't wait to go back to Sirius and Hermione and them finding out she is preggers.

Okay I read the whole thing over while having a 5 week old to take care of-not an easy task but necessary. Okay this Snape is nicer and doesn't have me wanting to beat him up so much. If I remember right, the scene with Bellatrix, Sebastian, and Ginny is toned down from the amount of torture. Over all, I enjoyed it and will be happy to read the next chapter.