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for Eternity Disrupted

by Vampirezdarkgurl

person jcrance
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I can't wait for an update. Would you put me on your alert list? jeniferwitt@bellsouth.net
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOOHH! Thankyouthankyouthankyou! *snuggles Jacob* BTW, if Harry needs a new chef, I can help out. I'm very good at cooking and can follow any recipe without too much trouble. Just plop me into the story (preferably with Jacob as a potential love-interest -_O) whenever you want (I'm just shameless aren't I? :D). The name's Sebastian Del Mar (I'm not expecting anything, so don't worry about getting me upset if you don't want to include me, it's your story after all; I'll continue reading and reviewing regardless).
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so not liking Edward right now!
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh thats evil, i want to know what happens, i cant wait, im also sad, i hate bella haha ^-^
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrrrrrr!!! You just had to leave it like that. Besides leaving us with a cliffhanger, I loved the chapter and the story. Please update soon.
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ohh, you're evil.... sooo evil.... how could you?
has bella gotten help from other wizards???
what is she doing to edward?
oh god... i don't even want do imagine what happened the night before.... as edward reeked of her.... uarghh....

update sooooon!!!! ;o)
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What....... Thats thats thats, UUURRGGGGHHHH, *starts throwing plates and dishes everywhere* I'm gonna kill her *Grabs demon killing blade and swipes at Bella* Damn I missed * pulls out sawn off shotgun, pulls trigger * *BANG* okay better now
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks so much for updateing; sorry (when it was broken) and glad (when you got it fixed) to hear about your computer screen.
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the first one. Hope the sequel is just as good. IamConfusion02@aol.com
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter... but what's going on with Edward? Was he lying or can he really remember nothing?
I look forward to the next chappy.... =)