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for Eternity Disrupted

by Vampirezdarkgurl

schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the perfect password...
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww while it was a great chapter, i was hoping edward's behaviuor wouldve been explained and that the bitch would be hurt lol. Still great though ^-^
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Edward's is going to need to be careful where he takes his little bitch, she's still on the run. I'd personally love to see Rosie tear Bella's ugly little head off and use it as a baseball the next time it rains. Can't wait for more.
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ACK! *GLOMPS VAMPIREZDARKGURL* Thankyousomuchfortheconsideration! I don't have to be a chef for the restaurant. I could be a teacher. My Hogwarts House is Slytherin, but you can do whatever, if you put me in the story. Like I said, even if you don't want me as a char, I'm still gonna read, now excuse me, I'm going to hex Bella.

BTW, here's an awesome Sorting Test for everyone: http://www.personalitylab.org/tests/ccq_hogwarts.htm It's very long, but it measures your personality and sorts you based on that. Enjoy.
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! Can I kill Edward? Pleeeeeeeeeeeease? Or Bellla? I'd kill them both for hurting Harry!
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay for thee update!!!!!!!!
Poor Harry.
Please let Remus's harsh speech to Edward be...good! *Grins*
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I wish it had the Remus and Sirius evicting Edward from Harry's house in it! Two Marauders..I'm sure..won't let it be an easy or revnge free eviction! They are Marauders and Harry is their Godson.
Plus, Remus and Sirius might could tell if he is under a spell or potion.
I so look forward to the chapter(I hope it's soon..but getting Harry back takes a while. Trust Is hard to rebuild) when Edward realises what he has done to Harry AND that Harry has left!!!!
Sniff....don't keep the boys apart for to long.....
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so about ready to cry!! But that just makes you a good author to be able to control the emotions of your readers. I still love, nothing can ever change my mind. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh noes!!! bad Bella, tricking Edward. why do i have a feeling that a love potion is involved? like the one that Ron gets hold of in the latest HP movie. still hope that things work out for harry. so please update soon, cuz this is evil to leave us hanging where ya did.
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*GASP*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
EDWARD HOW COULD YOU HURT OUR HARRY?!
...DO WE NEED JACOB TO KICK HIS VAMPIRE ASS?
Update soon please!!!!!!