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I love what an elaborate tale you're weaving. I also like the hints of what may or may not be UST, which is what's likely in this type of scenario. Also, I like how Voldemort isn't overly soft but is very focused on his goals.

Hi,

Yes, chapter two. I remember it well, it was one of my favs. I liked it so much because you start with Hermione rationally overseeing the situation she is in now and how it fits with the way you describe the room. You no longer just say that there are two chairs, a bed and a nightstand in it; you give the surroundings more descriptions, which gives it more purpose and an athmosphere to the reader. I also like how you gave each character a room that fitted their personality. XD

I also found it very logical she preferred not to disturb LV and went through Malfoy's room. Though, in hindsight the reverse would probably have been safer. LOL

And I found it great that you have her worry about how they are going to treat her and how her friends and family will be concerned for her, while she also worried about being judge for liking the idea of doing the research. It's totally fitting with her character.

Loved the little addition of the dark mark itching when LV is near. Nice little warning sign, too. You'll always know if he's around, so he can't sneak up on you, unless of course he can do something to make it not itch if he wants to. Shoot! He probably can. LOL

"And, if I may suggest, while Lupin can borrow clothes from anyone of us, they will hardly fit Miss Granger.

I'm really loving this story. I wish there was a way to make sure to read each chapter as you update. I've always been fascinated with the legend of Atlantis and mixing it with Lord Voldemort, Hermione, Severus, Remus, and Lucius; is just so yummy. ^_^ It was a wonderful surprise to see it on the AFF listing. I do hope you get to update often so it's kept at the top of the story list!

Hey Miya -- great story!
Love it so far, can't wait to read more.

Of course, we all know Voldey will marry Hermie in the end...but I like him being all professional and less pyscho for now :)

Update soon!

Yay! :D

Ok, I'm hooked. Very interesting story idea. Also, your writing is excellent as always.

Forgot to say that I will follow your lead, and read and review the story on this site. I too enjoy the lemons too much to go for the so-called "child appropriated" version on FFnet.

Hi,

I am so glad you started posting this story. I absolutely enjoyed it and look forward to see where you've taken it in the end, (cough) even if that will be a long, long wait. (stares at last chapter that I read and sighs)
But this beginning is very intriguing, so beta, beta, beta. sticks out tongue to Ankoku, who has her work cut out for her.
Thanks and I am very very curious indeed to what will happen after "it". ;)

ooh loved it, this looks exciting and promising.