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Great updates!

Awww Voldy needs to see the plus side to children exspically his and Hermione's. One they would be wickedly smart and powerful. They would make perfect genrals and other trusted officals and help him rule. Hermione Could kick any Death eaters ass and a hormoanal preganate Hermione would have them all cowering in fear at her feet. But really in all honstey I just want to see the look on Bellatrix face when she realizes that she wasn't allowed to carrie the Dark Lords heir but Potter's Mudblood was. That would be priceless.

Oh no. So LV let HG go and now she is returning to Hogwarts to continue her education. Hmmm, I wonder what you have planned for her. And how will HP defeat LV? Or perhaps he will not :)

Love Sonia :)

You know besides it being a little icky there is a reason most women wont have sex during their Period. You can get pregnant exspically the last days of it. That being said can I once again say how much I want little Voldies running around?

very juicy. I totally wasn't expecting you to kill off Remus. I would wonder if they managed to cure his werewolfism, but then he wouldn't have turned into a wolf in the first place. I don't find Aluga terribly interesting--maybe more little tidbits about her should be inserted? I thought Lucius would be waiting at the base, but he must have been sent off earlier. Damn you, I have to go reread! ;-)
I actually don't find Riddle, Snape, or Hermione to be OOC. I like how nice Snape's been so far, without him being all mushy and tender.

Oh no! Not Remus. Couldn't they just have healed him and therefore he turned back into a human but was knocked unconscious by the wall? I don't know, I really like Remus.

I am glad they took Severus with them, and I do trust he will not be killed either.

Loves the plot twists.

Love Sonia :)

*sniffles* Can't believe Remus died. I love him *hgugles*

Yay their away from the evil Atlantians!!! oooh Secrets gah update faster I can't handle the wait. Still think Hermione And Voldy should take over Atlantis. hmmm Voldy with even more power? Not sure that is a good thing but I'm always up for giving Hermione more power. Anyhow Update sooner!!!!

Excellent. This is really turning out to be full of twists and turns. I wonder how they will manage to leave once they want to?

Unreal twist about Voldie not being able to kill a Snape, which is a good thing as I adore him.

Keep up the great work.

Love Sonia :)

Now that update took way to long!!! You have a couple of areas where what you say isn't what you mean. I.E. Preasnt Terms should be Past tense. If you need some one to beta for you I can find those type of things it's grammer I suck at. Now on with my normal type of review. Voldy is going to mess it up if he can't keep his jealsouy under control. I no longer trust the Atlantians Voldy should just kill most of them and take over Atlantis we can then change the name to 'Dark Atlantis' and voldy and Herms can repolpulate it with cute evil babies. Psst what Voldy dosn't know is we slipped him a sleeping pill then while he was out had 'property of Hermione Granger, If your reading this and are not her you will be killed' tattooed on his butt.