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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eep, we're done already? The climax and denouement came faster than I expected. The ending fits the story quite well. I like that Voldie regains his humanity slowly and eventually regains a conscience, so we can be happy that Hermione runs off with him. I really like that Hermione knows that he could be lying about assorted things, but that he understands people better now if he's willing to lie in the first place. In retrospect, it was very useful that he was impotent before he got healed. Otherwise, he may have been more willing to manipulate and force Hermione before parts of his emotional humanity return. I've quite enjoyed your story. I do need to re-read--I don't remember when Lucius went from being civil back to being nasty, alas. Enjoyable sex scenes, and I like that the Order isn't portrayed as being corrupt or bad, even when they're not nice to Hermione.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you so very much for completing this story.
I have loved every minute of it.
Love Sonia :)
I have loved every minute of it.
Love Sonia :)
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, loved! Great end to a great story :D
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay happy ending. and yet at the same time I'm sad to see it over. Hopefully you have another story brewing in that head of yours.
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww.... wasnt that sweet?! What a nice ending! It satisfied every squishy little girly desire. All is right in the world.
it sucks that pleasing things have to come to an end, though. The word 'epilogue' leaves me cold these days. (sigh)
Write more! Your stories are so fresh and different. I cant wait to see what else you come up with.
it sucks that pleasing things have to come to an end, though. The word 'epilogue' leaves me cold these days. (sigh)
Write more! Your stories are so fresh and different. I cant wait to see what else you come up with.
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a great chapter! Excited about the epilogue and I loved how you led everything together. I do hope though that somehow Severus survived :D
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVELOVELOVE this story.
hmm.. i wonder whether he'll try to make hermione immortal or find a way to give up the thing he's been wanting his entire life long. I suppose he could do nothing and she could grow old and die. or something else (e.g. the royals of atlantis) could get in the way in some significant manner. Waiting in anticipation to find out.
hmm.. i wonder whether he'll try to make hermione immortal or find a way to give up the thing he's been wanting his entire life long. I suppose he could do nothing and she could grow old and die. or something else (e.g. the royals of atlantis) could get in the way in some significant manner. Waiting in anticipation to find out.
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Noooo. not right. He better come back for her. stupid man! Hmmm wonder what the cost was.
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY... hermione and voldemort dueling. I've seen it in quite a few stories and i always love the idea. I hope he can subdue aluga and figure out the curse. Go voldemort!
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful update. I know you said it's already writen but I couldn't help but think it would be justic if one of the men who gave Lucius his cure was Greyback.