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for Atlantis - An Adventure

by TheLadyMiya

schedule August 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Bloody brilliant...I know it's one of your old stories but I loved it...also I'm so glad you write Voldemort and Hermione...they're one of my favs ships...so thank you...I actually follow you on the other sites as well...

person Anonymous
schedule July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am late to the game, but I really enjoyed this and hope you continue writing! This is the third of yours I've read and I loved them all!
person TomioneConvert
schedule February 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hello, LadyMiya. First off let me tell you how much I enjoy your stories. You come up with the wildest, most implausible plots and yet you make sense of them. Mark of a good writer! I have been loving this story to bits. I love the character development without Hermione or Voldemort losing out on their essential characteristics. If I could, I would like to make just one suggestion... You need a better beta. There are some grammatical errors which I'm guessing are because English isn't your first language. I'd like to extend my aevices if you'd so wish. I'm actually an Editor by profession! Yay, me! Grammar errors are my bread and butter. :) If you want I could take a look at your stories and beta them for you. I hope I haven't offended you. A story reaches absolute perfection with the help of clean editing.
person k
schedule January 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So I found you by reading shared flame. I read it about halfway through then I gave up on it for a bit. Then randomly picked back up on it. I finished it, then read every one of your other stories. I have to say I love how you give LV and HG different personalities in each story. But also this has been my favorite one so far.
person Linber93
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished with your story! It is one of the better V/H I have had the pleasure of reading. So original, fun and twisted. But most, I enjoyed the fact that Voldemort didn
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was the second story I ready by you!!!! I love love love it! I can only aspire to be as wonderful at writing Tom-Volmione as you!!!!
person moor
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a really neat story -- loved how you wove the different mythologies in (especially the different writing elements)!

Also, I was really taken with your characterization (and humanization) of Severus & Tom, and their changing personalities.: )
schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh merlin, another amazing story Miya! The sleep I lost was worth it although you should be required to write an apology note to my boss for my lack luster performance at work lately :-p I loved your Aluga character and the ending was just perfect. Although I kinda wish you'd hooked Severus up with a girlfriend or even a cat or something since he's about to lose his favorite mudblood to the dark lord AGAIN, I mean really, he has to be tired of that happening by now. Thanks for writing!
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Tom get's his youth back before anything sexual happens. :/

schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione, the girl just can't catch a break. I like how this Hermione is different from the one in The Contract.