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for Two Left Feet

by Mizzfreestyle

person Snakekat
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, can't wait for the next one, write faster.
person Tassa
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you complete this story. I love where it is going!
person Elvira
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update! So cool!
person Sarah
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Guh i so need more lol. harry can be so oblivious its funny. update soon please!
person alexia
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ugh! snape with someone else and it sounds like he's leading harry on. hope he doesnt get away with that!
person Alaine
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

I just wanted to drop you a note on the way this fic is progessing. I think it definitely has potential and I am already hooked on it, but there are just a few things that annoy me. First of all, the last chapter [Chapter three] has not been spaced at all. The paragraphs all cluster together making it rather annoying to read. Secondly, there were quite a few spelling mistakes to be found in that chapter. Don't get me wrong, I do like it and all, but I'm just trying to make a few helpful points:) On a side note, I usually don't like it when Snape is OOC, but reading your fics actually make it worth reading. I love Harry-learning-how-to-dance-by-Snape-fics, so I hope you won't leave us in suspension and update soon with the next chapter.

Alaine.
person Jem
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story a lot already :) It's quite original and everyone is still in character (hurruh!). I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.
person Hitsuki
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start....and a great reminder as to why I can't dance >_<;;; I'm curious for the next chapter! I hope you update soon!
person ToriN
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems like an interesting begging, but I am wondering about something. Why is Luna and Ginny in the seventh year, the same as Harry and the others? Are Harry and them retaking a year or something? And why can Luna enter the gryffindor common room without any fuzz, when she is a ravenclaw?
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ToriN makes some good points. This seems like a nice beginning. I like how Snape reminds me of House. :)