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for Two Left Feet

by Mizzfreestyle

person Anon
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant transition of feelings!! :)
I'm trying to write hp/ss and ss/ofc, and finding it quite difficult
to write harry's change in feelings properly without making it
obvious what I'm doing.
person laura
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was great! although not for harry... =(
I hope snape starts giving him clues soon as to how he feels!

thank you for updating so soon but now I feel like a junkie waiting for my next fix! lol
person Sarah
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i was so hoping for a little more to happen between harry and snape :( so update soon pretty plz! need snarry action!
person aconite black
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes please! Quicker updates and longer chapters are very welcome. I
person lalala Laura
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon! I love it! and you have them in character which is great! if you would like some fanart I would be more than happy to doodle some for you, in exchange for another chapter! ^_^
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
if you need a beta, I'll do it. Contact me at Danyealle@GMail.com
person tainted_love
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the story so far. I hate when I start reading stories that are in progress, though, because when they're really good like yours is, I want them to keep going! :D I hope Harry takes his head out of his bottom sometime soon and just makes out with Snape. Good grief already. I also hope that you don't get too busy and that you have a lovely weekend!

Oh, and I'm not sure if I should do this here, but if you could send me notification of your story updates at tainted_love214@yahoo.com, I'd be much obliged. Thank you!
person Sinead
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I am loving this fic so far. It is an original concept, and I like the idea of Snape and Harry getting intimate through dancing. Would I please be able to be notified of updates?? Cheers.
person Sarah
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for the next update!
person Alaine
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Snape will try to tell Harry to keep to his own business, and not mess with HIS business. I really liked this chapter, I can see their relationship progressing quite nicely, and I had to smile at Harry's obvious jealousy at Snape. Update soon!