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I just wanted to tell you that using names and/or whole words for page breaks is one of my biggest pet peeves ever. I find that it totally distracts from the story and serves no purpose that could not be better done with a series of -'s, .'s, or anything else that can be read as purely symbolic. Even using initials like HP or SS would be better. A page break is meant to differentiate two chunks of text but the purpose is completely lost if you cannot even tell what the page break is at a glance. When I see:
Harry Potter Harry Potter Harry Potter
I read it just like any other sentence; it pisses me off. Now I'm not saying you should go and change this story, or any others you may have written. I'm just hoping you take it under advisement in the future.

I'm sorry I ranted at you, but I needed to say it.

I actually didn't even mean to read this story, usually I avoid unfinished fics because authors often never finish and leave the reader hanging. I understand if you don't want to finish, but I'd really love it if you did.

Awww, this is so cute!

At the beginnig i thought harry was a bit of an idiot. now i really like him.
Snape is just cool, and while i cannot imagine him dancing salsa, no matter how hard i try... i guess tango is just THE dance for him! :)

we were supposed to learn salsa in physical education (i think thats how you say it in english!?) The good thing was, i knew chacha and rumba so it was easy for me. The fun aspect came with our teacher believing in her great talents( she is tho only one ) while holding the instructions for steps (feet and arrows on paper) upside down ...
also fun, a freind of mine was considerably worse than ... no comparison found. two left feet implies that while you are off beat, behind the timing, confusing the steps you still somehow resemle dancing. Harry might not be a natural (except around snape/a good lead), but it was impossible for her to grasp even the basics.I mean it.
Imagine 6 people teaching one: that means one dancing partner who leads, two right/left front to copy the steps from, two right/left behind in case of accidental weird postures or planned (never executed ...) spins for copying and one directly behind to help leading.
it was hopeless.

if i had known back then, i would have asked you to send snape over, he seems to work miracles! XD

I love to dance and while the focus never really was on argentine tango, i actually did a choreography to "Roxanne"- wich was real fun! And we got good grades on it too!
I'm rambling, you are bored for sure... but you did ask for any kind of comment ;)

This is a fun idea, a cute/great story and i would love to read more!

lg veronica

I was so happy to find a really good fic only to find out it hasn't been updated in almost a year >< Really though, this is some good work. I hope you continue it.

Wow I'am speechless. There are really really few stories that can make me hate Harry sometimes. But you did it and not just once haha.
I hope he gets rid of Ginny soon. u,u" I look forward to your next chapters

I just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying your story. You've managed to hold my attention even though the pace has been incredibly slow and Harry is extremely irritating! Quite an achievement :)
I don't know how I'm supposed to know you've updated as I can't find a story update alert option :/

OH PLEASE don't give up on this one, I love it!
Looking forward for an update.

AWWWW!

Cute! Loved it! i don"t Like Ginny so I don't care much for her so I'm hapy nothing is going her way.Lol.

Update soon!

<3 So much love! You made my day, my week.....yah. Keep updating!!!! please!

This is brillant!! You have to up date please! I'm dying for more. Harry realy needs to dump Ginny its realy unfair to both of them, weather he wants to admit it or not he dosent love her anymore. Please give us more :)