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for Origo

by Namet

person Juana13
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww harry is finally starting to have some feelings for draco! oooh, wish i could read some smut.... can't wait to at least have them kiss... *pouts*
looking forward to more!! can't wait!!
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE POST A NEW CHAPTER SOOOOOOON! i love creature fics.
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooowwwww *waits for more*

~eros
person Aalto
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... Is the Dark Mark fading? What would it mean if it was... An interesting little twist.

Keep up the good work, the chapter was a bit short but then, they can't always be long. Update soon!
person SilverLion
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How about a prize of Harry or Draco dressed as Hitsugaya from 'Bleach'? This story is being paced beautifully. Sure, the beginning seemed rushed, but that was because of the mating urges. The insecurities and the other difficulties that are coming afterwards are perfectly suited for this story. You are a wonderful writer and I hope you continue.
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Where did Draco go? Sooooo need chapter 7!!! Why is the mark faded.
person Mila
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... update fast!

...and hand that Draco in maid outfit over 8D
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What's happening with the Dark Lord? I hope Harry doesn't lose the baby amidst the oncoming chaos, if there will be any any time soon. Thanks for the update. I'll pass on the maid Draco with cookies; I might die of dehydration from severe drooling. XD
person safa
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story.i found it funny too at times.like albus blushing,snape not having an answer and y harry 4 d life of him didnt know y he was preening. Bt on othr note i want 2 slap draco silly 4 acting that way wit harry. Wil u plz continue this fic.
person Aalto
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Dumbles should be evil or even overly manipulative. Those stories tend to turn really really odd sooner or later and it makes things so difficult considering that Dumbles is quite a powerfull figure in the wizarding world...